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Published: 2007-04-11 16:21:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 5154; Favourites: 241; Downloads: 86
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i had just put another version of this (sans headphones) in my scraps early this morning. but i decided to put is up as a deviation so i can get more responses to it.
need in-depth critiques please!
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i realy like the pic,i have one thing i think needs work,the part of her arm next to her head i think it is kinda to skinny for the rest of the pic i would make it just a tad thicker.but that is just me!great work on the perspective though!
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it looks so.....So....SO..........REALISTIC!!!! the details are amazing you have an amazing eye for them also it looks like wind is blowing her pants one way and her jacket the opposite way unless i am, of course, mistaken
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I love the pose and perspective so much. The folds on the pants look fantastic!
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The collar looks a bit weird (If that is a collar)...Multiple barrages from my high school art teachers have told me that from the downward perspective, ellipses should have more of an upward arch...The way you drew it makes it look as if the perspective is more near eye level...
The hands are also hard, though I have no room to say about that, because I absolutly suck at drawing hands...
Other than that, I think you're in good shape for a damn awsome drawing... ;D
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Can I have your permission to try coloring this in photoshop, and then putting it up in my gallery?
If yes, I'll put it up after coloring it, and of course, put your name on it.
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you may want to wait for the lineart... but i dont mind if people use my stuff, i just want credit as the original artist.
send me a link when you're done
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Her right arm's proportions doesn't right. Maybe if you extended her elbow more far out and thicken her biceps will fix it.
Everything else looks great! I can't wait to see it colored. ;D
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This is the first picture I have ever seen of yours... You are an excellent artist~!!! This is beautiful! ^^
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wow i love the angel! She's gonna be stellar once she's colored
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If she were an audiophile, she wouldn't have her headphones going straight into the ipod, and they likely wouldn't have a volume control on the cable
Other than that, 'tis awesome
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i just liked the name...
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Audiophiles are a little crazy
I almost profess to be one
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Really good and all. Just stunning. But one thing: whats with the right hand? how is it holding around the headphones? But grate drawing
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0_0!! below is only my opinion ^ .^
The trousers need to have a little more creases in like around the belt-line and the second right pocket of the left pocket needs a little creasing too (if you get me LoL) so does the inside of her jacket . . . her eyeshadow could be a touch darker and so could the tatoo, it looks a little watermarked and that arm needs to look as good as that face and the nose ring I thought was a pimple for a while . . . but then I'm currently feverish
And I just wanna say I could nEvEr do this in a trillion years!! It's wonderful
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I love the camera direction here. Great work, it's just amazing to see even line art look this sweet!
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oh noes, it would be such a pity not to colour this one. The perspective is great and the idea of the pose too. Outfit would have such a great effect being coloured!!! You have to!!!!!!!!
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You should add some indications of weight to the pocket with the music player in it, i think it would help add some gravity to the movement of the eye in that section. The tattoo i'd like to see rendered with the same type of line as the rest of the drawing. If you're going to colour this with smooth colours, like cel shading, then it would be ok to leave it that flat, but alongside your sketchy lines it looks /too/ flat. Also, i know you've got focus to consider, but think about making the lines towards the bottom of the picture thicker and darker, since they're in the "front" and it will help to add depth to the drawing as a whole. I forgot to say, this is a great drawing!
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done and done! check the lineart when you get a chance
thanx again
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You know, I acutally think I liked her better without the headphones. It's still really good work, though.
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Good pose,it's hard tocritique something so good. XD
The cloth looks a bit sketchy but good..
It's just too awesome. Love the pose.e =3
Faved.
If you color it, it'll be even more amazing. =O
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wow thats freakin amazing
love the pose. extremely lusty and the angle from which u drew is perfect. and im jealous of the tatooe she has hahah. this is a fab piece.
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Perhaps a little more hint of her left arm could be shown, but it's great, I love it.
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You did such an awesome job. I really like the angle you used with the slight twist. It's not easy to do.
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i luff it, i think you have done her facial expression very well, and the clothes wrinkle very masterfully with the pose shes in. the only problem i have (well i dont really have but you want critique so hear i go...) is that the arm seems a little misshapen, i dunno it jus seems like it isnt as real as the rest of her. but hey dont take my word for it i luv this piece and i cant wait for you to color it.
and might i say that the tattoo is pure awesomeness.
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this is awsome of love the concept it would look great in color
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Nice picture! ^ ^
Very well drawn, good anatomy.
-Sieg
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I.
LOVE.
THIS.
If it was for me, I wouldn't color it. But it's 'cause I like sketches more than colored pictures
Anyway. It's one hell of an angle, the one you chose. Gratz for that. Still...isnt' her right elbow a bit too short? Or is my perception of perspective being fubar?
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I think I liked it better without the headphones. The wire seems to obstruct the picture somehow.
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other than the fact that (atm) you cant tell thats a wall. but im sure with more detail and color it wont be a problem.
for a sketch.... its damn near perfect!
Something you wouldnt NEED but it could use, is put her other arm in there where you could see it.
in this shot it just so happens you cant see it
but i would put... idk how to describe it. kinda like shes holding her hip but resting her hand on her pants by like having her thumb in her pocket or pants. does that make sense?
maybe theres a phrase for that pose but uh yeah thats what i think ;D
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