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2000wires [2019-04-12 01:53:58 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting OC! But why are her parents so cold to her? at the very least Star? I hope things aren't too dark, as I kinda wanna know but I'm afraid I might drive myself away if anything gets too dark.
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2000wires In reply to DrekiSaga [2019-04-12 17:31:35 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty, thanks for the heads up. Is it just in your "Rise of Twilight" Series so far or are there other places I need to look at first for the lore?
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2000wires In reply to DrekiSaga [2019-04-12 22:57:08 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty, thanks. I hope there is a happy ending to this story, especially one where Star can actually be a mother to her daughter in this AU ^^
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hopebutterfly [2018-07-06 12:26:07 +0000 UTC]
Poor twilight she deserved love from her parents 😢
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DrekiSaga In reply to Arrachnearts [2018-06-03 11:39:01 +0000 UTC]
It is never too late to comment! Anyway, I am glad you like her and thank you for the compliment!
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Translucentairlines [2017-07-23 20:52:55 +0000 UTC]
Hey, can I try to write a short-story that puts these events into detail? I had some awesome ideas!
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DrekiSaga In reply to Translucentairlines [2017-07-23 21:09:33 +0000 UTC]
I am actually writing a story myself and I have everything planned out. But I am interested in your ideas and if you are willing to share them then send me a note and I might even put them in the story, with your permission of course.
Also, if you are interested, here is the first chapter of the story, Rise of Twilight:
Rise of Twilight- Chapter 1It was raining. The monster soldiers were running around, trying to gather their weapons from the training grounds. Max, a wolf monster, threw his last shields to the armory before adjusting his cape`s hood and locking the door. "Do you think the Mistress will do it?" the wolf heard from behind him. Turning around, he found a soaked William standing there. William was a younger cyclops, who joined the monster army just a week ago. "I don`t know, kiddo. The Mistress is a Butterfly but following the tradition is her decision." the older soldier turned around and started walking to the soldiers` quarters. William looked up at the direction of the palace. Just that moment lightning struck across the sky and illuminated the castle.
The young cyclops shivered and ran after his elder to get some night`s sleep.
The Mistress of the castle, Star Butterfly, looked at the running young soldier and huffed to herself. This is why she was against young soldiers at first. They are too
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Translucentairlines In reply to DrekiSaga [2017-07-24 02:09:21 +0000 UTC]
Huh? No wait, I want to write a story about the events that LEAD UP to the one-night stand. I wrote a post what my idea for the story before I saw this post. It's UP THERE - ⤴⬆⏫🔼
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Translucentairlines In reply to DrekiSaga [2017-07-24 02:02:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay. My story starts out with Queen Moon talking on the phone (?) trying to convince Star to come back to her.
That doesn't work.
The next and longest part of the short-story focuses on a ferocious "Queen Slash Freeway battle" (thought Queen Slash was a nice name, but wanted to give the story a city-centralized feel). The Starfee Battalion evacuates the Queen Slash Freeway (love that name, sorry) as the Ludo-led Monsters arrive to try to overthrow the city (no name for the city yet). For a long time the battle looks like it's going in Starfee's favor, but Ludo accidentally discovers a spell that destroys nearly all life within a close proximity to him. The spell kills Ludo, half the Monsters, and 80-percent of the Starfee Battalion.
The last part of the story follows the shattered battalion as Star and Toffee retreat with the remaining troops to an abandoned apartment tower that was evacuated before the freeway battle. Star and Toffee have been slightly injured and after fixing each other up they go try to clean out the apartment tower for food and supplies. Once they find themselves alone however, Star and Toffee get . . . intimate, to say the least.
That's just my idea. And I would have written it in present-tense because I'm not a fan of past-tense.
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DrekiSaga In reply to Translucentairlines [2017-07-24 09:40:42 +0000 UTC]
I get the idea but like I said, I actually have the events planned out and how that one night stand happened will be explained, just like everything else that doesn`t have details yet. But your story sounds interesting and you can still write it. It will be like a fanfiction of a fanfiction! Just remember to credit me if you decide to make it a deviation.
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Translucentairlines [2017-07-23 20:51:08 +0000 UTC]
Aw man! I just read the description. Poor Twilight. She doesn't even get love from her Mother? But Star's always so happy-go-lucky. 😢
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DrekiSaga In reply to Translucentairlines [2017-07-23 21:06:24 +0000 UTC]
Well, not in this version. I won't give away any spoilers but let's just say she found out something horrible that made her cold hearted and turn against her family, friends and home.
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Translucentairlines In reply to DrekiSaga [2017-07-24 01:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Is it alright if I come up with a detailed short-story about these events that lead up to the 1-night-stand? I have a really cool idea! Please please please?!😆😁
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Decepticonspy [2017-07-12 22:07:33 +0000 UTC]
OMG FINALLY! I have been looking for any Star x Toffee work here! SO sick of MoonxTOffee. Glad to see a fellow fan
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ARTZUME [2017-07-10 16:20:01 +0000 UTC]
First, I like this, I'd love to see more of Twilight Butterfly.
Second, did Toffee rape Star?
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DrekiSaga In reply to ARTZUME [2017-07-10 17:40:18 +0000 UTC]
WHAT!? NO, HE DID NOT RAPE STAR!!!!!! In this future, Star turns cold and angry at the people around her and leaves them. She joins forces with Toffee and starts planning a war with the monsters and Mewni. But one night both Star and Toffee came back bitter and angry from a lost battle and they lived out their frustration in the bedroom if you know what I mean. They were BOTH WILLING that night. It was just a one night stand that resulted in Star getting pregnant. The only reason they didn't get rid of the baby is because Toffee convinced Star that the baby will be powerful when grown up and a huge advantage.
Anyway, I hope that clears out some confusion that you had and this also is written in the bio in THE DESCRIPTION! But I`m happy that you like her!
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Translucentairlines In reply to DrekiSaga [2017-07-23 20:47:06 +0000 UTC]
Oh crap! I'm sorry but when I saw this art I thought Toffee raped Star too.
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ARTZUME In reply to DrekiSaga [2017-07-10 17:51:59 +0000 UTC]
Okay, okay! I didn't get it! Sorry!
Don't block me, bro!
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DrekiSaga In reply to ARTZUME [2017-07-10 18:47:18 +0000 UTC]
Heh, I`m not gonna block you over a simple mistake.
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ARTZUME In reply to DrekiSaga [2017-07-10 18:59:46 +0000 UTC]
oh, thank god.
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