Comments: 51
Lyrachan94 [2014-06-08 19:38:05 +0000 UTC]
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Impact
*DISCLAIMER: I'm not familiar with this fandom, so I am critiquing this piece vaguely in reference to the characters!*
This is a truly incredible piece that you've brought to life. The perspective of the drawing makes it look as though the subjects are about to leap off the page at you, ready to kick some ass and take some names. I definitely think the balance of the subjects is a good one; the one leaping away looks as though he's being supported by the one leaping forward and vice versa. It also makes of a nice duality of the nature of battle, defense and offense both taking play.
The color palate was well chosen, along with the textures and brush effects used here. The armor looks like it is actually real, specifically the effect you used to make the gems in the man's armor glow, similarly how you made the woman's eyes and the inscription on her helmet glow as well, thanks to that interesting ray of light shining down on them (indicative of being victors of battle, or the saviors of that city, perhaps?). The touches of blood spatter, small glowing sparks (what I'm interpreting as embers), and the way the surrounding area is falling away and shattering, leaves a lasting impression of an enormous battle taking place, with these two right smack dab in the middle of it.
The biggest impression I get from this piece, though, happens to be from the sky. I like that despite how the chaos you've made the centerpiece takes up the majority of the page, the sky and clouds remain a passive judge. As if peace is soon to be at hand thanks to this pair of warriors, despite the embers (and probably bodies) rising up to their heights. The ray of light also plays a part of this interpretation, the way it highlights the fighters at seemingly center-stage.
Overall, this is an amazing piece describing a seemingly massive battle. It's incredible, and personally, I rate it as phenomenal!
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ElinTan In reply to Kyo-kun809 [2014-06-13 00:39:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much~! I'll keep working hard!
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TheElite-Loki [2015-03-07 13:48:14 +0000 UTC]
i thought this was loki at first
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Fishbely [2014-11-04 17:45:34 +0000 UTC]
I really like this, but I get from the title that they're about to die. Please tell me they don't die.
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FranBunnyFFXII [2014-07-11 05:28:12 +0000 UTC]
This is excellent!
One of the few that actually captures Shyvana's face and attitude well.
This is well done, and I quite like it. Bravo.
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Eirenare [2014-06-26 14:30:00 +0000 UTC]
Stunning piece >___< I absolutely LOVE IT!~♥♥♥ x3
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xglide [2014-06-15 22:36:41 +0000 UTC]
highest of qualities as usual! nice work!
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Wanderer619 [2014-06-12 15:55:04 +0000 UTC]
Sweet!
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rafa-10 [2014-06-11 17:03:50 +0000 UTC]
This one is cool! Very good
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Samii3D [2014-06-11 15:24:52 +0000 UTC]
god damn
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XandImus [2014-06-10 17:35:31 +0000 UTC]
EPIC!
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ArcturusXIII [2014-06-09 06:04:41 +0000 UTC]
DEMACIA!
This looks good
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ElinTan In reply to Lyrachan94 [2014-06-09 05:39:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much~! It was lovely
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loswodorotlenkos [2014-06-08 18:18:16 +0000 UTC]
greatest champions ever. rly nice work
gice that man a cookie
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young920 [2014-06-08 04:57:39 +0000 UTC]
wow! Malaysia has talent!
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ElinTan In reply to young920 [2014-06-09 05:42:28 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it!!
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Halowing [2014-06-08 04:05:07 +0000 UTC]
SO AWESOME!!!!
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ElinTan In reply to Halowing [2014-06-09 05:43:06 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it!! Thank you
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Halowing In reply to ElinTan [2014-06-11 04:12:50 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome~~
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DeadCobra [2014-06-08 03:30:27 +0000 UTC]
Cool
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ElinTan In reply to brynhildr13 [2014-06-09 05:09:58 +0000 UTC]
AHHH!! I'm flattered thank you~~
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U23Art [2014-06-08 00:44:07 +0000 UTC]
This has quite the exciting air to it.
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SugarPandaOtaku [2014-06-08 00:20:13 +0000 UTC]
*Mind blown*it's epic by the way.
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SugarPandaOtaku In reply to ElinTan [2014-06-08 01:16:56 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. Thanks for the hug...hugs are beautiful. \(^◇^)/♥♡★☆
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SugarPandaOtaku In reply to ElinTan [2014-06-15 18:39:57 +0000 UTC]
Indeed*hugs*of course they do, everyone thought it was the sun that brought the warmth...but PLOT TWIST it's hugs! tan..tan..TAN! They don't suspect a thing. *evil panda laugh* \(^□^)/
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ElinTan In reply to SugarPandaOtaku [2014-06-16 01:37:12 +0000 UTC]
LOL *muhahahahaha* They will never knoww
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SugarPandaOtaku In reply to ElinTan [2014-06-16 03:09:35 +0000 UTC]
Indeed*slowly backs away into a dark corner*....*evil panda laugh.. again..coughs. ..and keeps laughing while her exposed hazel eyes shine a golden hazy gloss in the darkness* them fools don't suspect nothing!\ (^-^)/
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