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Enydimon — Fightin' Attire Comparison
Published: 2014-01-15 17:09:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1501; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 22
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Before I left for Europe I got a really cool critique from Bryan Lee that can be found here: funkymonkey1945.deviantart.com…I decided that when I got back I would actually try to implement those things by more than just taking note of it and moving on. I decided to sketch something up with those critiques in mind. Now I gather there are probably still some things wrong with it and if I were to take the revamped one up to a complete finish I would alter things like the perspective on the background and make tweaks here and there, but I think I like the overall feel better on the new one. I still have to work more on full figures and harmonizing the weight and perspective and I think this is a good start.
The style ended up being a bit different because I was paying close attention to his notes but I don't think it's too far removed from my usual stuff. It's nice to get in-depth critiques again, I seldom get them these days now that I'm not regularly posting on art forums like I used to. I usually have to seek out critiques these days from people I know so this was a pleasant surprise.
I thought I would toss up a comparison to show the differences between the two in such a short time.
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Interesting, I've never seen an MMA ogre before 
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Well critique is OK as long she is constructive. -> she is.. OK and your character seems to be "corrected" now.. but he looks now droughty .. lost his muscles.
Even with the "mistakes" I prefer your first edition..
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It's true, he got a bit skinnier in the corrected version, maybe it could be considered a younger version of himself.
But overall it's much more natural looking and looks less awkward than the first one. His anatomy makes more sense than it did before and I can easily beef him up to match the first one without interfering with any of the corrections but it wasn't my main focus so I didn't bother to match it up. If I were to take it to a complete finish I probably would have done that.
I think it's fair to like the first one for stylistic and build purposes. I just prefer the new one because it presents me with a more interesting and accurate base to work with than the first one.
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hmmhm.. okay. Glad to see that you still allow to "like" the first edition.
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You can like whatever the hell you want as long as you're not hurting anyone. If you want to prefer the first version then by all means prefer it!
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