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Malochroma [2017-11-28 01:53:52 +0000 UTC]
I really like the detail of the artwork getting rougher and more angular between the death of Dusty's sister and the final panel, especially the use of bold red background and how the Vigoroth is portrayed in its movements. It really helps emphasize Dusty's pure, fractured panic during that period and how he saw the creature. It's a stylistic detail that elevates the scene above and beyond. 100% aces.
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Novanplz [2017-11-12 00:07:46 +0000 UTC]
Gods above...
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spyrkle4 [2017-05-08 21:40:45 +0000 UTC]
I CRY
Jeez Dusty has the same past of my Pidgeot
but with an evil Pyroar instead of monkeys
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Articuno32 [2017-01-26 01:23:56 +0000 UTC]
Geez! No wonder Duty is so hard and cruel!
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latiasfan5 [2016-08-31 03:28:25 +0000 UTC]
i have no mouth, and i must scream
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Zassa2 [2016-06-10 00:29:46 +0000 UTC]
Dusty's backstory... Holy shit. Poor little bugger.
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RasenCore [2016-05-27 12:28:22 +0000 UTC]
WHY!!!!!!!! THESE FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!?????????!???!?!?!?!?
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tommonius [2016-03-19 23:11:39 +0000 UTC]
oh..
my god..
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2-Tailed [2016-01-06 13:08:24 +0000 UTC]
How fitting, that I was listening to this while reading the page.
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Doon11 [2016-01-02 23:13:31 +0000 UTC]
*SOB* SAD STORY EVER
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Tenshineko01 [2015-12-24 06:16:00 +0000 UTC]
This is why Dusty is the way he is. He saw his Dad and sister slowly decay for who knows how long.
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reyasemsz [2015-10-20 06:11:31 +0000 UTC]
now, that's some depressing stuff...
and i was listening to Chopin's Prelude in E minor (op28 no4), it really gets in the mood.
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GrayKnight121 [2015-09-19 01:07:53 +0000 UTC]
Dusty, like it or not here's a hug.
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SUPER-NINJA14 [2015-08-07 22:02:43 +0000 UTC]
Stop making me feel emotions!
No wait, If I stop feeling emotions, then People will think I'm heartless.
Keep making me feel emotions!
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samanthafsj [2015-07-18 00:42:22 +0000 UTC]
so. Story time.
I love to browse the internet. one day, I saw this. I thought it was a pretty nifty one-off comic. I saw it again today and decided to search up this "Godamn Critical Hits" thing. and, I was rather surprised to see a full fledged comic. i've started to read through it, and have only gotten up to this point. so far, my favorite part is the animation you made. and, admittedly, I would have preferred to see the damn mudkip to die... I felt sick seeing Nocturne die...
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Epifex In reply to samanthafsj [2015-07-18 01:53:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, the whole out of context thing always irks me a bit when people share these on other sites. I mean, I guess I appreciate the publicity, but few of them work on their own, and frankly my writing isn't fantastic and it opens it up to a much more critical audience. I'd much rather people make it explicitly obvious that it's part of a set.
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samanthafsj In reply to Epifex [2015-07-18 05:44:45 +0000 UTC]
try putting "Part Whatever" up by the title. people will consider reading other parts if they realize they are reading #47 first
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Epifex In reply to samanthafsj [2015-07-18 09:28:08 +0000 UTC]
I have considered that, the only issue is the irritation of having to go back and do it retrospectively. Maybe one day if I'm really bored and have a flash of motivation.
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samanthafsj In reply to Epifex [2015-07-18 18:29:24 +0000 UTC]
alright then. and, frankly I agree. the story was kinda ruined knowing what Dusty could do and what he WOULD do...
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powermenz [2015-05-28 21:37:08 +0000 UTC]
best backstory ever!!!
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EliTigre [2015-05-14 22:04:36 +0000 UTC]
*wheeze* Oh my goku baby, skin me alive and melt my my face, but nothing could hurt me more than what I've just seen so accept the damn hug dammit ;o;
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hero1211 [2015-05-12 23:27:07 +0000 UTC]
starts to cry a lot*
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Amir1205 [2015-04-22 11:42:38 +0000 UTC]
I cried.
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Lumpy-Space-Prince [2015-04-19 06:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Oh glob, that's terrible... Poor Dusty. >.< That's the most tragic backstory I've ever seen in a nuzlocke. His mother could still be alive though, right?
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VulpineShadows [2015-04-18 22:09:05 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me of this creepypasta called " I have no mouth and I must scream." Poor Dusty.
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Xyliaz [2015-04-18 08:16:57 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god. So tragic. D: He just had to stare at his dad's body until something came along and moved it...
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Articuno32 In reply to Xyliaz [2017-04-26 01:55:58 +0000 UTC]
And his sister's body...
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Charlockle [2015-04-08 14:27:05 +0000 UTC]
Excuse the language, but- HOLY CRAP.
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JBMetalGoat [2015-04-01 01:34:07 +0000 UTC]
Fits the pokedex entry perfectly.
Bravo!
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Indigolightning [2015-03-31 09:11:44 +0000 UTC]
This is epic!
And true to the Pokedex entry for Cascoon
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SkeleLock [2015-03-30 12:59:48 +0000 UTC]
OH MY GOD
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Myahster [2015-03-28 17:12:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh god, why.Β
He wants to scream, but he can't.
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LordofChairs [2015-03-26 17:09:05 +0000 UTC]
Why am I laughing at this?...
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Articuno32 In reply to LordofChairs [2017-08-20 23:41:12 +0000 UTC]
Because it's stress laughter. You're trying to laugh it off.
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LordofChairs In reply to Articuno32 [2017-09-23 19:06:39 +0000 UTC]
That might be an argument if I didn'tΒ genuinely find it funny...
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skateqe [2015-03-26 16:38:29 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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Anonymousrabbit101 [2015-03-26 13:30:39 +0000 UTC]
... Like if you cry everytime
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bluedragon2244 [2015-03-26 12:00:45 +0000 UTC]
so sad. Β Β
but well done though.
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natalie713 [2015-03-26 11:46:53 +0000 UTC]
wow, awesome, cool effects for the background!!!!!
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blued1500 [2015-03-26 08:32:57 +0000 UTC]
sad man
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KayzieAnne [2015-03-26 05:42:48 +0000 UTC]
And it had to sit there. Looking at it all...because Cascoons can't move.
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Amunia [2015-03-26 04:22:38 +0000 UTC]
oh my god, you just made me thankful for still having my dad, right after an argument, im going to go apologize to him
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Epifex In reply to Amunia [2015-03-26 10:26:50 +0000 UTC]
Nice! Good to know I've been of some help.
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AceArtistTara [2015-03-26 03:49:33 +0000 UTC]
Wow, so epic!!!
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