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Published: 2010-10-30 16:07:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 2037; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 5
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Page one for the new prologue. I thought I would start off the story a little differently. I hope you like it.Cover page
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Wow!! First of all this looks amazing, and I love how the story begins immediately, it hooks me to the story! The scar on the wolf's eye sets the character very well. The background look good as well. The only thing I would change the lighting. It's kind of hard to see the wolves and the speech bubbles. I suggest lightening up the background. I also love how well you did the moon and stars, the detail on the moon looks great and the stars are very bright and makes the sky look pretty. Overall, the storyline is exiting and the wolves look very good, the only thing I would do is make the background lighter. Awesome job!
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I have been told that about the lighting for this page before and I just have not gotten around to fixing it. I don't want to redo the whole page (at least not right now). I want to get more into the story before I go back, but I can fix the colors with the word bubbles though. Thank you for reminding me about it. I will fix the bubbles right now.
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thanks for reading it! I was also giving suggestions for the future :3
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There we go, is that easier to see now?
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wow!! I see the difference! looks great!
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I love this so far, especially the stars, speech bubbles, and the overall background, though the anatomy of the wolves could use some work. Then again, this is an old deviation.
Also, don't you think it's a bit cliche to have a black wolf named fang with scars and a thirst for revenge? I don't mean to come off as rude, but I have seen a few comics with a wolf like that playing the 'bad guy.'
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Thank you, and yes I realize that it is not the best, but I was still somewhat kickstarting my work then and still getting a grip on things. I will be remaking some of the older pages so that they are more up to date visually. Though that will be at a later time.
You know, I never really thought of it that way. I would have to agree that it is very cliche, LOL. The good thing is that this character will not be making a physical appearance in this chapter so nothing extreme needs to be done yet, but I will have to fix that when I do get to refurbishing the older pages. Thanks for bringing it up.
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hi i'm ~renatawerewolf and i would like to critique your work, i'm not able to post a critique because i don't have a premium membership :S but well.
first of all good job! i really like that the story begins like this, when you read it you instantly want to read more and thats good a perfect beginning for a story!
well a thing you should change is the lightning it's to black an it's hard to red the words, the scars on the wolf are really good i can guess he's the Alfa male and that he has been in lots of fights, but remember not to exaggerate on the scars i mean the scars on your wolf are good but try not to put more on his body or something.
other thing is that on panel 4 the face of the wolf is good but the nose looks kinda rare it should be a little more circular.
i hope my critique helps and don't offend you because i really didn't mean to offend you
good job!
keep going like this!
have a nice day!
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Bésame como si el mundo se acabara despues
bésame y beso a beso por el cielo al revéz
bésame sin razon porque quiere el corazón
bésame ....
free requests are OPEN!!
I'M WARNING YOU: SOMETIMES I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M SAYING
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Thank you very much, as far as the lighting goes I have been told that before with this page. I am trying to remember to lighten up the backgrounds from now on, the problem is that he is a black wolf and it is at night. I just need to find the right balance of colors for this situation.
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nice job!
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Bésame como si el mundo se acabara despues
bésame y beso a beso por el cielo al revéz
bésame sin razon porque quiere el corazón
bésame ....
free requests are OPEN!!
I'M WARNING YOU: SOMETIMES I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'M SAYING
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hmmm... Not a much clean job. Although the graphic part looks really good I can't read ANYTHING! Basic comic rule: make use of contrast! If you have dark colors in your frames you should use light colors for your balloons and than a darker one for the speech. You better fix that!
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Ok I will fix that. The reason I had the bubbles black and words red was just a way to show they were evil. Any suggestions on how I can make it easier to see and keep that aspect.
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Instead of colors, the best way to do that in a comic is through the balloon format and the font you use. About the font, make sure you use something that has the emotion you want and is easy to read at the same time. Because there are some fonts that you need to think a bit to understand.
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Ok, thank you for your help.
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very awesome!! i really like it
you have a little mistake in panel 3 is revenge ^^
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HAHAHAHA... wow I am an idiot, thank you I will fix that right away
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Thank you very much, I am so happy to hear that.
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Thank you, I think it is too. This prologue is definitely going to be much better and more detailed then the last. I am so excited about it.
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me too. HEY!!! We Could Be EXCITED
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