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Published: 2013-05-10 13:05:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 101622; Favourites: 2363; Downloads: 1155
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Yay it's finally done, my first full comic (intentionally) done in my own style.It went through many different rewrites. I had versions where the fighting was more vicious towards eachother, but I felt that it didn't suit it.
They're all wrong, Princess Luna is the best foalsitter (proof)--> [link]
I felt like this comic took way too long, I really need to up my production speed :/
I feel silly that I actually have to add this to the description, but my experience with some of my past comics have led me to realize that people take these comics way to seriously. Please don't actually take this fight seriously, don't get mad at any characters, get depressed,or get mad at me for this fight. Yes I'm aware that they are acting slightly out of character, it was done for the purpose of humor.
Also in the case that anyone is wondering what a "cotton headed ninny muggins" is, it's just a random reference to the movie "ELF", I figured it would make sense for Pinkie to say something random like that. It was only after typing it out that I realized "You know, written down this looks like it could be a racial slur...", which makes it all the more funny
.Proof that it's not a racial slur ---> [link]
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Wow this is a great comic! I think that the art design is really great and the writer is very talented. I especially like the comic strip because it is longer than any other comic strip I have seen before. The only thing I dislike about the strip is that through the sixth and eighth section of the comic Fluttershy kept the same expression kind of. It's not that I disliked it, it's just that it bothered me a little. If anyone else disliked this comic I think I would have to go to their home and murder them (not really), because the people who worked on this took out their time to entertain us, so I approve! I can really hear the voices in this story!
Awesome job guys!
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I really love the art style here. The facial expressions are brilliant, though there's slight room for improvement. They could be a little bit more varied, and Pinkie's face could be more stretchy; she tends to have a very exaggerated mouth.
I really love the setting. Everything is arranged well, though I feel the background is a bit busy. It was one of the first things I noticed, though the story and the characters more than compensated for it.
Finally, the dialogue is excellent. I can just imagine it in the voices of the characters, especially when Pinkie and Fluttershy get angry.
Great work.
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No problem!
You're right, I didn't look at the eyes very much. They are incredibly expressive. That's probably part of the certain 'Je ne sais quoi' that made the comic so brilliant.
The reason I felt the background felt busy was because of the density of black lines, especially in the clouds. Still, it doesn't matter too much.
It's still overall a brilliant comic.
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Woops. Meant to put this as a reply to Mr DeC0Y.
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Yeah, I tend to go a more "lazy" route when it comes to doing mouths, they are my weakness. I usually try to compensate for it by making the eyes really expressive, but I'm not sure if that is as noticeable when I use this style because there are no pupils.
"Everything is arranged well, thought I feel that background is a bit busy."
And here I was worried that the background was too plain, lol.
Thank you
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No problem!
You're right, I didn't look at the eyes very much. They are incredibly expressive. That's probably part of the certain 'Je ne sais quoi' that made the comic so brilliant.
The reason I felt the background felt busy was because of the density of black lines, especially in the clouds. Still, it doesn't matter too much.
It's still overall a brilliant comic.
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This is my first critique, so here goes...
First, good idea for the background: ponies at a picnic enjoying fruit and chattering. Personally, I didn't think they were out of character. I particularly liked Fluttershy's role in this one: trying to switch the subject first, then standing up and having her friends apologize to each other, then making a twist by actually commenting the subject that lead to the fight. And finally, using her famous stare. Well played, Fluttershy.
The comic is pretty funny and clever, starting with the pun in the title and continuing to the story itself. It's also nice to see an artist having his/her original style. Especially if it has its charm, and this one definitely has.
Twilight as an alicorn is a nice touch, and shows that the artist is keeping up with the show, though I wouldn't mind at all if she was depicted without her wings. It's good either way.
All in all, pretty good job and I hope to see more comics like this from this artist. Nice!
(Hope it was all right for the first time...)
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It's a nice compliment, but normally a critique includes something the artist could improve on.
A model I read once for a critique went:
Compliment
What can be improved
Compliment
Following this model you're pointing out the good, but you're also pointing out something that could have been done differently.
I do agree with what you've said, though.
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Nice. A critique of a critique, all while following the model for critiquing! 10/10 would analyse again.
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This is is a hilarious comic that shows that friends still have fights once in a while. The picnic scene means alot to me because Twilight starts singing her BBBFF song, a song that go around my house A lot in my house now. I'm glad that you made Twilight Sparkle a alicorn because really, when everyone makes her a alicorn in their fan art, there's always a sadness to it. I'm glad you took to the next level. The only problem is I wish there was more!!!! Thank you for making this and please please please keep up the good work!
-Kcjudy
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I'm glad she got over it after the wedding. Not to mention that she has a niece now.
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I made a comic dub of your comic! www.youtube.com/watch?v=tnBSyCβ¦
I did my best.
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That's really good! Thank you, I appreciate it!
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WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you
and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
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oh yeah, i forgot for a minute that Fluttershy foal-sat the Cutie mark crusaders is "stare master".
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Never laugh at Fluttershy girls. ^^
Comic dub: www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Wp2M3β¦
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pffft! the stare!! the stare!!
she'd makeΒ a greatΒ foalsitter!!
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(Sorry i got scared at theΒ
Last sentence) this stupid my friend told me to repost this WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will poop, even if you only looked at the word warning!
Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental
hospital, because she pooped her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to poop all the
staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so
they set up a special room to make her poop, as humane as possible but it went wrong the
toiler they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she exploded.
Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on
a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and poops you slowly, by farting on you
and watching you cry to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and
she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste
this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You
will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your toilet, pooping and farting.
THIS IS NOT FAKE!!
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ONCE YOU'VE STARTED READING THIS YOU CAN'T GET OUT! READ ON IF YOU DON'T WANT TO DIE
... ... .........A year ago A girl named Kathy was hated by everyone. Everyone made fun of her. She was ignored. Even by messages. One day she decided to kill herself. Because even her parents ignored her. She jumped out her window. No one noticed utill people started disappearing. Kathy haunted them. She made them suffer like the way she did. She hung them slowly and stabbed them over and over very slowly so they could suffer like she did.
If you don't send this message to 15 different comments you will die tonight by Kathy. Because she considers it ignoring her.
Example 1:
Dave looked at the first sentence and said,"Spam"And the next day the neighbors found him in his backyard, dead.
Example 2:
Joane was alone. She didn't have kids or a husband. She had a lot of friends. When She had a sleepover with them she quickly had to check her e-mail.She saw this message and
sent it to only 6 people because she thought she couldn't die that night because she was surrounded by people. The next morning Joane's friends found her in her bathtub, dead.
If you don't send this, Kathy WILL find you
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SHE'S A HUNDREDS ANIMALS'S FOALSITER OF COURS SHE'S THE BEST
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Meh. She just knows how to hypnotize. That's nae foal-sittin'.
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She said in the Flutterbat episode she just using it only in emergency
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Aye, I remember it, now.
Though ... if she has to resort to this when foal-sitting, I'm not too optimistic about her abilities, to say the least.
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Um, well... i do like fluttershy, but no way she's the best foalsitter. Love the comic though!
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Yup, thank you for noticing.
This was back when I was thinking that I would use this as a kind of signature style for my comics, but I later realized that it was too similar to other styles so I changed my mind.
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Don't look directly at her or you'll turn into... *stone
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Me and Rainbowlover568 Γ made a comic dub of this here it is :Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kb8dsdβ¦
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It's great, thank you 
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No problem Β i thought it was an awesome comic (btw awesome avitar)
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Evil-DeC0Y no problem!
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This joke had no punchline.
...IT HAD A STARELINE!
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sounds interesting. Pinkie foalsitting filly Twilight and Cadence foalsitting the cakes. Wonder how that would play out.
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BUDDY THE ELF REFERENCE
PINKIE
SAW
BUDDY
THE
ELF
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"Don't look directly into it!" xD
Pinkie...
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Well if you think about, Pinkie and Twilight didn't have to have a staring contest with a cockatrice Β while babysitting the CMC because they decided it was a smart idea to go into the Everfree alone. Fluttershy is a better foalsitter compared to Cadence and Pinkie.
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lawl i get it cuz twilight was a foal and pinkie and fluttershy have been foalsitters, nice!!!
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