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Last part of "Lapine'
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We'll...call it a draw.
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Comments: 62
Really enjoyed this series and will look forward to the next one
hehe love Michael's spacky 'I WILL KILL YOU' face 
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She always has that shawl. She's not physically there so cold means nothing to her (other than voicing her discomfort to Michael, since the worms themselves are actually upset by it).
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yeah I thought that was why you drew her kinda huddled, because she's the manifistation (can't spell!) of the worms and they don't like it 
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Oh we'll get plenty more awesome with her bitching at him next comic. I am excite!
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Meh, he's her bitch and he knows it. It's why he's sarcastic and blunt to her and nobody else.
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Michael you done fucked up.
poor Kate and Spot, silly raven ;_;
Glad you finally finished it, it looks fantastic and I feel so bad for Corpse Eater ;n;
Michael less so, and not because of the bird incident.
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Fucking twitching corpses is bad news.
...He'll catch a disease.
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Well considering fucking twitching corpses is just what he does, it's sadly not as extreme an insult as one would first assume (coming from him).
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Dude got owned by those crows/ravens. lol
Awesome comic, I'm loving this panel organization.
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His swearing reminded me of the angry marines for some reason
"BADGER CUNT DICKS !"
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Dang, I was hoping for a last-minute save for the little crow.
Awesome page, though. His outbursts made me chuckle. "Ugly fucking cunt bitch" is my new go-to insult! :'D
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I was gonna throw a racial slur in there too, but it sounded too silly.
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i got stuck on the one panel where michael has his mouth open screaming. that is a really cool panel. and then i read on. i didn't know that he could sink down to that language level. ouch. then again, he did just get shot, so...
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Tisk tisk....such language Michael.
I find it interesting that Kate picks up the body of the dead raven. I don't know why that small action of hers fascinates me, but it does.
Also, the panel where Michael is absolutely flipping out is HORRIFYING. Just, ugh, I wouldn't want to be near him when he's in that kind of mood.
Michael, I think you may need a day at the spa after this. Seriously. Calm yo' tits.
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He gets some "fun" in the next one. You'll be back to hating him soon enough.
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Oh no! I hate him still! He gets no remorse from me.
Seeing him get shot is all too amusing. It should happen more.
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He gets his ass kicked again in comic 4. Like, horribly kicked. It's a fun!
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Haha, oh, man, he broke his gentlemen's facade when he lost the advantage.
Ah, I may like villains, but it's always nice to see them fail when they normally don't.
Brilliant; was anticipating the finalized version of this, and it didn't disappoint. Really dig the style you used throughout and the coloring. Though I must say, the realistic colors didn't do too much for the mood, but the characters and actions well made up for it.
Neat little painted-looking bottom panel, too :U
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It bugged me too, but the whole scene had to blend together well and suddenly going from ultra abstract to realistic but with abstract colors and realistic again might've been too visually jarring. A sense of confusion was required, but not so confusing as to make it difficult to understand where everything was in relation to one another. Curse you floating panels.
that and there's something very vulnerable about revealing how it looks, as it looks. He's more pathetic than anything that way.
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Yeah, I agree; that would probably be a bit more difficult to switch around from one to the other like that and still get the proper "feel" without visual confusion.
There's probably some way or another to get a color mood in, but likely, it'd change the scene more (maybe the time of day or something to that affect).
And he does seem a lot more isolated and pitiful with such contrast between him and the landscape. Overall, it works out fairly well the way it is, regardless.
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At best maybe his screaming picture could use some more contrast. But my brain is burnt out from this and I gotta just accept some things and move along.
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Probably; but yeah, no need in hassling over it further if you're just done with it.
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Micheal, if you don't stop that RIGHT THIS INSTANT, we're going home!
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just give him the damn chocolate bar already. Everyone's staring at us
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But dear, if we give him what he wants, he'll just learn from it and next time we'll end up in the clean room!
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That's why you fill him up on chocolate bars.
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But then he'll get faaaat
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So take him on more walks. I'm tired of picking up after him/
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The off-leash park banned us after he ate the elderly couple, remember?
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Then take him to the other one.
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But I don't liiiiiiiiiiiiiike that other oooonnnnee, it's full of lower class people.
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Hehe, Sugarbell's upset. Uh-oh~
Hey, I'll go look again to make sure I'm not missing anything, but when we tryout, do the pieces have to have people? Also, could we use a piece that meets three of the criteria with another piece that covers the missing part (probably sharing criteria with the first piece but missing some itself)?
Pssst, the language could get offensive to some super sensitive people.
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You give me as many examples as you can, but I want to get the sense that you can do them all together.
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He bit off the head as she shot him. I guess that's the third option.
The crows wont abandon her because she did shoot the cat but the cat doesn't get anything to use against her.
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Did the poor raven have a name?
If not then I posthumously name her Awkwin.
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Her name was Spot and she was young and silly and got too close. Poor Spot.
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Me thinks that half of the babies are probably named Spot.
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Corpse-Eater isn't very clever with names. They always have bland or obvious names. Joe, Jane, Spot, Chinny, Dot, That One There...
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I wonder what That One There looks like. The birds apparently take the time to remember her name.
Which by the way, that one "Kate" line from the bird made this comic. I don't think I was emotionally invested until that one moment.
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eugh, I got shivers, Fab. Loved it. Kate, get out of der, gurl! The detail at the start and the end aaa. Love it.
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What is this? I'm feeling oddly sympathetic for The Cat. I'm kind of surprised to see him so humiliated, apologizing to sugarbell and all that. As always, great job with the comic! The timing is excellent!
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