Comments: 37
bravesfan1586 [2014-02-06 04:27:27 +0000 UTC]
Awesomeness ur a great writer when's part 2 lol
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Feathers01 In reply to bravesfan1586 [2014-02-06 17:58:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!! : Glad you liked it!
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bravesfan1586 In reply to Feathers01 [2014-02-06 20:42:23 +0000 UTC]
Yvw I've liked all of your stories esp the f/m ones heheh
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J-Wolfe15 [2012-09-13 21:29:52 +0000 UTC]
Very cool start, Master.
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Feathers01 In reply to J-Wolfe15 [2012-09-13 23:43:25 +0000 UTC]
Heehee, you are too kind!!!
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oneortheother [2012-08-18 05:42:16 +0000 UTC]
This is one of favorite stories, but since it hasn't been undated for FIVE YEARS I think I have lost hope on part 4 coming anytime soon ):
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oneortheother In reply to Feathers01 [2012-08-19 03:50:39 +0000 UTC]
Yay! Don't hold it against me. Five years since last update!
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Nickdust [2011-05-23 19:21:29 +0000 UTC]
I liked this story when you first wrote it, but this is even better...more complex with more action. Keep up the good work.
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ShadowPan10 [2011-04-25 12:47:34 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful story.
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bobbo123 [2008-07-31 21:10:18 +0000 UTC]
the suspense is amazing! especially at cira's escape attempt.
please write more!
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TheBandito [2007-11-21 23:47:29 +0000 UTC]
This rocks a whole heck of a lot.
Seriously - I vastly dig this ^^
Keep writing.
I demand moooooooooore.
B
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TheBandito In reply to Feathers01 [2007-11-22 20:45:11 +0000 UTC]
Great news.
I can't wait ^^
B
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iragaines [2007-11-21 17:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Super hot
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DemonXGirl [2007-11-19 06:47:22 +0000 UTC]
you are a really great writer!
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TicklishTikal [2007-11-19 06:23:38 +0000 UTC]
This is an absolutely fantastic story. It's really creative, and I love the tense mood you seemed to put in it. I can't wait to see more.
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