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feeshseagullmine — Journey: VerB
Published: 2010-02-13 02:12:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 1250; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 50
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Wasn't going to submit this, but a friend of mine mentioned that she liked this version more so than the other one. All it really is that I didn't put on an extra screen. These were the colors I was originally working with.Version A is here: [link]
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The colors, the expression and the movement within the picture are incredibly good. The coloring is soft and I loved the shading, it was done nicely. Though the best part is the movement you can perceive in the hair and the clouds.
The only detail I caught was the left arm. While the hand might as well be hidden behind Ange's body, it looks a bit unnatural given the angle of the arm and the fact that her sleeves aren't that long to hide her hands. So it leaves a feeling of the hand been missing. However it's only minor and doesn't affect negatively the drawing.
You did a wonderful job! Congratulations!
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thank you
yeah, I noticed the arm right after I scanned in the pencil lines..I didn't want to fix it digitally 'cause it would have looked awkward 
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Oh I agree with your friend, the first one is beautiful but this verB is beautifuler oAo aww the sky~ 
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Very pretty, I love your style; it's so soft, and the colors and lines blend beautifully. Always love your backgrounds too- so I wouldn't scrap this. It may not be a grand huge picture, but sometimes it's the simple things that catch the eye. x3
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Ahh well I don't see a problem with that. Sometimes people revise, change things. And having two different versions to me kind of embodies change. So thanks for taking my input into so much accord! 8D
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Extra screen or not, this is still very pretty.
Oh, and apparently, you won my Points contest for last year LOL. So now I owe you another picture. :3
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thanks
O.o!? I won something?! wow...I never thought I'd actually get enough points xD
well...I owe you a picture too >>;
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Yah, you won~
I also owe the previous year's winner their picture... I feel so bad for taking so long on it... :<
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