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Color! Light! Can't say I'm entirely happy with it, but I just wanted this page to be doooone. I'm hoping that as I finish more pages, I'll end up improving my workflow. My biggest issue right now, IMO, is efficiency. Takes me ages to get colors and shading to an acceptable level.
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...way to state the obvious, bandit. And this looks so cool! You did a really nice job with the coloring.
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this is rad dear btw Im almost done coloring your pic x3 <3
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I really love especially the closeups, because you can really feel the warmth of the fire where its reflecting, however I personally think the top panel is too coloured now, like you've got more colour (Probably due to the fire) that makes it seem less dreary and of a bad situation, but this may just be my opinion.
The top panel feels like its just lost some of its atmosphere because either the colour from the fire expanding maybe a tad too much, and I think the walls/wood needed more shadows.
But apart from that, this looks really good, especially the contrast of the fire and rain in the bottom two panels.
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Yeah, I definitely agree that it got a little too saturated. To color the outlaws, I pulled colors from rendered art in TOGG, and I think I ended up making the background colors a bit bolder so the characters didn't stand out as much. It does look a little too cozy, doesn't it xD I'm going to try to tone it back a bit next page.
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Considering you were experimenting it definitely worked well though, the first page you coloured you got the feel of the environment spot on, obviously it'll be different in doors, which you captured so well too
<3
I hope you don't mind my critiques if you do I'll stop ;o;
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Nonono, DEFINITELY critique if you see something I can improve on. The whole point of this comic, besides just telling the weird little story I came up with after playing SW, is for me to get better at drawing and storytelling. I want to do art as a career, so I need all the practice I can get.
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Aha brilliant. I look forward to seeing how you improve with each page <3
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I know that coloring can be a hassle,
But time more you do it, than the better you get at it.
You really ought to give yourself more credit,
This is a really good page.
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