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FleetingEmber — Devil Jin Lines

Published: 2009-11-04 17:58:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 2741; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 2117
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Description Working on getting him coloured as soon as possible.

I really wanted to make him smile, but a happy devil doesn't really work, lol. XP

People are free to colour this if they like, just link back to me ^-^
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Comments: 10

DragonsChest [2009-11-07 17:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to see the colored version...

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v-Vampir3ss-v [2009-11-05 12:30:18 +0000 UTC]

well it could have been an evil smile LOL

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Agaave [2009-11-05 12:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Yay, cool guy! He has very nice pose, like he was just about to fight against something that attacts from above!

Armors are great, especially those on his arms! He has also cool tattoos on his stomach and chest.

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Vendetta666 [2009-11-04 21:39:32 +0000 UTC]

great job on the wings

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Dark-Asin [2009-11-04 20:27:37 +0000 UTC]

Aww, When I was 9, I used to love him ^^

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TeraMaster [2009-11-04 20:18:08 +0000 UTC]

First of all, a great lineart, great drawing! But I do have a bit criticism: first is, the lines on his neck. They should have a different angle... it's hard to explain which angle. Then, I don't like how the leg to the left (his right) is bent - the knee is misplaced, I think. And the third thing, about what I'm not sure, the wings have too long feathers. But other than that, everything is great!

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FleetingEmber In reply to TeraMaster [2009-11-04 20:28:32 +0000 UTC]

I know there's a few bits iffy with it, which is why i posted it to try and get crits before i started colouring XP

I had problems with the legs. Human anatomy is still something i struggle with. I was trying to go for some sort of perspective, but i don't think it worked.

I'm halfway through colouring though, so it's gonna be difficult to change I should've waited, lol. I might be able to alter the knee and move the neck slightly, but it'll have to be at the end. If i can't fix the knee, i suppose i could just crop the legs out. But then again, i really like how the trouser shading has worked. I think the neck is too far to the left. It needs to be moved right a bit.

It's a learning process ^-^

Thank you sweetie

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TeraMaster In reply to FleetingEmber [2009-11-04 23:19:30 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

Oh, and here's some of my experience. SOmetimes, I notice that I did something wrong, but I also know that I don't possess the skill to fix it properly yet, so I simply go on with the drawing and finish it. But sometimes (like now, with my newest deviation) I decided to wait for some criticism. And I don't mind if I submit something with mistakes, it's still my drawing, and I'm proud of it

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Kittyillustrations [2009-11-04 20:14:02 +0000 UTC]

great work hun i adore the wings

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Hezz123426 [2009-11-04 19:22:36 +0000 UTC]

I love this video game
You sohuld draw him shooting lasers out of his eyes like he does in TEKKEN!

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