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ShadowedAcolyte [2016-02-26 04:22:39 +0000 UTC]
Morbid, of course, but the end is solid despite being predictable. The gap on the page before the final word is a nice caesura.
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cwedmart [2016-02-23 10:06:11 +0000 UTC]
The way "God" appears in this text, far from the rest of the unobscured text, in God's own place far away, is a powerful statement in itself.
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fllnthblnk In reply to cwedmart [2016-02-23 10:09:20 +0000 UTC]
I thought so, too. I like how the original text can arrange itself in certain ways that allow new arrangements like this to happen--a reason why I enjoy blackout poetry so much.
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AkaneSuki [2016-02-18 20:07:49 +0000 UTC]
He saved all his tears for god.
That was powerful.
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