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fllnthblnk In reply to moth-owl [2010-09-29 17:00:46 +0000 UTC]
Coolio. Thanks!
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wendybird111 [2010-09-28 03:26:36 +0000 UTC]
This has a vaguely hypertext literature quality to it. Or maybe a schizophrenic flowchart vibe...
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lunaiy [2010-08-18 21:59:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, lovely.
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fllnthblnk In reply to lunaiy [2010-08-19 02:15:31 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
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ebo2 [2010-08-17 04:42:19 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful.
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fllnthblnk In reply to ebo2 [2010-08-17 04:58:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
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Secretly-Schizo [2010-08-13 07:52:14 +0000 UTC]
I love this. It was a bit confusing at first but I really like it.
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Bloody-X-Brilliant [2010-08-13 05:43:49 +0000 UTC]
This is like, one of the most interesting things I've been in while o.o
Definately a fav xD
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fllnthblnk In reply to Bloody-X-Brilliant [2010-08-13 05:44:57 +0000 UTC]
You've been in the poem?! You'll definitely need to show me how this is done!
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Bloody-X-Brilliant In reply to fllnthblnk [2010-08-13 06:19:49 +0000 UTC]
ah ~.~ yes, well, : cough : , when I said 'been', it was really 'seen' in disguise.
: slinks away to my loser corner :
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tsurfergirl [2010-08-13 02:16:17 +0000 UTC]
That's very interesting; I like. I've heard of people doing this, but never actually seen it. Nicely done. =]
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fllnthblnk In reply to tsurfergirl [2010-08-13 03:29:41 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha... found poetry is a bit esoteric. I don't know of very many poets that do it, although Austin Kleon is pretty good (check him out!).
Glad you like!
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irishkitten96 [2010-08-13 01:27:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow.
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fllnthblnk In reply to irishkitten96 [2010-08-13 03:30:34 +0000 UTC]
That's what she said!
J/k, j/k. Glad you like it!
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mangochorro [2010-08-13 00:50:29 +0000 UTC]
great ideas love this concreteness of the poem
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SadisticIceCream [2010-08-13 00:24:21 +0000 UTC]
I absolutely love this one.
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mimistras [2010-08-12 22:28:51 +0000 UTC]
I really like this one!! [link]
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fllnthblnk In reply to mimistras [2010-08-13 03:31:41 +0000 UTC]
Thanks... and a link to my profile, too?
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fllnthblnk In reply to b1gfan [2010-08-13 03:32:43 +0000 UTC]
Oh, it's satisfying me like a mo-fo. These found poems are a nice change of pace for me, actually.
Thanks for the comment, Dave!
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random-kumquats [2010-08-12 21:58:32 +0000 UTC]
a bit convoluted, but i like it
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random-kumquats In reply to fllnthblnk [2010-08-13 17:04:05 +0000 UTC]
convoluted as in it takes work to read the poem, what with the lines leading the eye from one word to the next. it makes the read interesting because the reader's mind, and eye) is engaged in following the poem. At the same time, it takes a a bit of effort to follow, meaning it may take a bit longer to fully interpret and "take apart" the poem
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alexluna [2010-08-12 21:28:45 +0000 UTC]
I love the concept-map you created for the poem. I especially love how both works (the authorβs and the poet) are haunting pieces of writing and you can read both. Like the poet revealed a deeper meaning of the authors words...as only poets can. Beautiful.
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PaintTheSkyYellow [2010-08-12 19:50:11 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely beautiful. Took my breath away(: Lovely.
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fllnthblnk In reply to Munedark [2010-08-13 03:34:50 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you very much!
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Munedark In reply to fllnthblnk [2010-08-13 05:31:53 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure ^^
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