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Published: 2016-11-30 15:18:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 3410; Favourites: 279; Downloads: 17
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I wanted to practice some character expressions, though I think I made them a bit too realistic. I still need to figure out how to draw Undyne and Alphys... I dunno. If you have any thoughts on how I should draw any of these characters, please leave a comment. Thank you!Related content
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I really love it when its all sketchy, cool work!
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Oh man, these are fantastic! I love how scary Undyne looks, and Alphys looks great. Papyrus is wonderful too, of course!
My only critique would be that Sans feels a little too young, here, especially compared to Papyrus. I think part of it is that he's missing the circles under his eyes (I tried drawing a younger version of Sans once, and found that getting rid of the circles under his eyes makes him seem significantly younger), but I'm not sure what else you might change to fix that. Sans is a tricky character to get just right, to be sure.
Still loving this style, though--even the sketchy lines and the coloring look great!
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I agree with you about Sans; he does look too young. I did forget about the eye circles. Heh heh. But I'll definitely be practicing him more.
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If realistic is your purpose of this, i suggest make sans's jaw seperate, not connected jaws like in the game
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Heh, I've tried that before... he just looks weird like that. But good suggestion anyways
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Hnnh I really like it! The concepts are amazing, especially the way you drew Undyne!
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Wow...this is probably one of the best Undertale expression artworks I have ever seen!
I think Undyne, Alphys and Papy are perfect, but for Sans, maybe you can make his smile a bit wider, and like, all the time, even when hurt? If you wanna portray different emotions for Sans, you can keep the smile there, but you can change his eyes a bit, but not too much.(like when he is hurt, keep everything the same, except for the fact that his eyes are totally black without that white iris) However, you can also keep his brow unmoved, cause Sans without eyebrows seem better
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Fantastic suggestion for Sans! I don't really get how to draw him yet, but I want him to be as canon as possible, which like you said means always smiling and the rest of what you said. He'll be a challenge, perhaps one of subtlety, but that's how he is in the games so it fits. Thank you for the feedback
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Holy crow! These are all so intense and incredibly awesome! I love how devilish Undyne is here, while Alphys is being adorkable. Excellent work, the scratchy, frenetic style really serves to bring out the true character of these folks
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Wow I had to look up the word frenetic; I am one word smarter today! Impressive vocab btw. I really like scribbly drawings myself, but I'm trying to get better at cleaning them up without losing the character. Thank you for the comment!
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Hahaha happy to help and thank you. This style of drawing always catches my eye and for Undertale, it is just so fitting for the characters 
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That style is unusual and I absolutely love it! Undyne looks a bit scary, but I suppose that fits her personality. xD I don't have any critique to give really. I think these are really good interpretations.
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Sweet, that's very helpful. You know, I just can't imagine Undyne without a ferocious expression... and she's so fun to draw too!
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Your portrayal of them is very unique! I especially love Alphys, she looks super cute and like a dinosaur, which she should be :3
I have the opposite problem, I have a very cartoonish style and it's difficult for me to draw realistic but If you feel like you're drawing them too realistically (i think they look amazing like this btw) you could try exaggerating the eyes or some other features!
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Ah, exaggerating the eyes seems like a good idea. Thank you for the feedback!
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