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Published: 2005-12-18 08:13:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1175; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 36
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*sings* heaven...im in heaven.....and....i forget the rest o oanyways, u can call this practice, worked on improving some things here, like dress folds and hair o o and yeah, ill probably use this for my website too...
done in Photoshop CS2
Critique is encouraged, i want to improve, so tell me how i could work on some features and yeah *braces for attacks*
BUT one note, i know the eyes are all....shapeless and weird looking...too big..>_> i KNOW so...yeah
another thing, theres a big space cause, its for a layout sooo there was really nothing to put there o o; but i think it sorta looks like a heart so ....hmmm....KH RIPOFF WHEEEEE o o;
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you had your life, your dreams, your future ripped from you
we will never see a work or word from you again
sometimes, i hope there's a heaven.Β
i want to become known some day, too.Β
soar high
R.I.P
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Actually... everything looks fine O_O It's a great picture, keep it up! ^_^
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Heaven, Iβm in heaven
And my heart beats so that I can hardly speak
And I seem to find the happiness I seek
When weβre out together dancing cheek to cheek
XD I love that song lol *lucy*
This is beautiful, though. You've gotten better at folds
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I think the body is just fine. It really looks very right, girlie. With the face since her head is turned slightly to the side HER left eye( on our right) would be closer to her nose. Try drawing yourself in a mirror in this pose to get the placement of the features right. Otherwise really great job! I love the open space and the heart shape of the blue sky. Really nicely done over all.
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wow someone critiqued XD
ok! yeah i DO need to work on faces >_> thank u for the tips XD and just thank u!
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Hmm...the only critiques i can think of right now is try to make her arms and body a little more thicker. she's a little too skiny. Also, try to make the line thickness change in some parts. the lines are really this in some areas where they shouldn't be (ex. the eyes).
comparing this picture to your older pictures, its quite obvious you're improving
(PS. my english is shitty, so sorry if you couldnt understend that.)
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naw it isnt bad ^^
and yeah i knew about the eyes
thank u for tips
and thank u period o o i really appreciate it
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*gasp* AHHHHH, OOOOHHH, So PREEETTTYYYY!!! Great Job!!
(I know you want "critique"... but how can I critique you? ^^ Keep up the good work Flutterby!!!!!!!)
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Critique? This? I think this is one of the best pieces you've done!
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pretty colors! i love her dress and wings >w such nice soft colors~ ^^
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Wow, this is one of your best, I think- It's so light and cute! :3
I love it!
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