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Published: 2004-03-01 05:07:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 3599; Favourites: 142; Downloads: 61
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You look for an escapebut there's nowhere to hide.
You need to get away
from this feeling inside.
The madness around you
has penetrated your soul.
You cry out. You long for
your times of old.
You need something
to end this misery.
You see the blade.
You need to bleed.
You hold it in your hand.
Just one single blow
can end it all now.
You decide to go.
You feel the sharp slice
accross your vein.
You see the blood
but you don't feel pain.
You find the happiness
that you once loved,
but you can never grasp it
once you've been
CUT
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Comments: 36
This is like, Wow. I actually kinda know how this feels. Wow. Right in the feels. Wow.
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Just remember the golden rule: Sideways for attention Longways for results
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I like when u say
You need to get away
From this feeling inside
I relate to this alot
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I recently created a suicide themed group, if your interested your welcome to join! But no hard feelings if you don't #TheSuicideDogs
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...love...this is totally how it works with me! i cut
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really liked it and its so true.
can specially relate to the first and last paragprah
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it's so amazing that you understand so completely how it feels eventhough you don't cut... and it's all so true...
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OMG I LOVED IT! i cut and i can really relate to this. this was probably one ofthe best poems ive read.
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Yeah, this is great. I can relate to all but the last few lines. I've never considered suicide an option, I just use cutting as a way to control my emotions, as the first several stanzas suggested. Fav!
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The sad thing is that there are so many teenagers that do that stuff. I've been trying to stop cutting myself, but I always seem to be finding myself with a pair of sissors in my right hand and cuts on the left.
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amazingly fantasticly good! astounding because you don't cut, but captured the feeling!
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Thats..uhm..amazing. I really really like this, so much that my eyes started welling up only in the second stanza. Wonderful, really. =]
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awww thank you! I didnt know it could move anyone. thanks ^_^
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YES!!! YES!!! THIS POEM KICKS ASS!!!! I LOVE IT!!!
i like poems about pain, suffering, agony, sorrow, and lost hope
its just who i am.
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hehe, wow. I didnt know anybody would like it that much. Thank you
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wow, awesome poem, but i would never cut myself from sadness, although, i have cut myself when i was bored. now i have an X shaped scar on my arm.
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"..you've been
CUT"
AHHH! Oh, geez...! Seems I got a little too into it...
But I very much like it 
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'Tis rather good. I like the flow of it. And the rhyme and whatnot. It's like, bluntly obvious, but that's refreshing now and then, seeing as way too many people try to wrap everything up tight in metaphors these days. Nice job.
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This reminds me of a poem I wrote several years ago, its very similar in style and content.
...You see the blade.
You need to bleed.
love that bit, has a nice rhythm to it...
If I were in a slightly worse mood I'd go through and suggest how this could b improved, but I'm in a good mood and I don't wanna tick you off...
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YOU BEAUTIFUL BODACIOUS FEMALE YOU!!!
this is....damn. That is all I can say....damn. You are good, and hit home for thousands of cutters out there.
Keep up the good work...I will be watching....
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Damn...
I mean...DAMN! Wow sis...this is REALLY good!
I'm...I'm friggin speechless.
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