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I like this one very much.. (: and whole this project is very nice!
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You are so truly kind to say so. Many thanks for these kind words, my dear!
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I love it! Sometimes I just wish I could sleep as well, but, you see... ^^ I like it so much, I can relate to this pretty well, lol. <3
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May we both find a little more sleep, and may it come with the bonus of some beautiful, peaceful dreams! 
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Absolutely touched me.... love this so much.... some nights all I say is , let me sleep now... let me sleep...the opening is something that captured me, drew me in, in an instant... lovely once again thank you 💖
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It warmed my heart to hear that this spoke to yours, my dear. Thank you so very much for sharing these kind words.
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Real like the meaning of these words! They also seem like song lyrics!
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I love your song-lyric take on this! Too cool!
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I so know this feeling.
I'm always the first up, and the last one asleep. My husband says I'm a worrier, and I guess he's right. But someone has to care.
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Alas, too true. May caring come with less worry and more sleep for us, in future!!
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I'm so truly glad to hear it! Thank you for sharing!
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These are the words I'll be repeating every day when school starts.
Lovely work!
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Alas, indeed. 
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I was also thinking of mythology lol, for some reason I kept thinking of the guy forced to push a boulder up a hill for eternity but it keeps rolling down...similar burdens. It is short but you really portray that feeling of stress and the wish to just rest.
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Mythology certainly seems to be the dominant consensus with this one! But your take on eternally rolling a boulder up a hill is unique among the correlations, it seems. Bravo!
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Makes me think of Atlas the Titan (alongside the thoughts that go running through one's head during lessons)
Evokes such a strong sense of heaviness; well done!
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Very cool connection! I'm so glad to hear that you enjoyed it! 
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I'm so very glad to hear it.
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Yay for sleeping ...this one struck a deep chord with me, thank you for that. 
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Sleeping = good-ness. I'm so glad it struck a chord with you, my dear -- and may that chord sing you right off to some very sweet dreams!!
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oh yes...you can tell I don't sleep enough but how well I conjugate irregular verbs I'll go take a nap on my grammar book
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Ugh. Isn't that the age-old story. Curse you, irregular verbs!! 
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This is both beautiful and morbid (which is my fave combo), and I love the visual flow as always!
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I'm so truly pleased to hear it! Many thanks to you for sharing, my dear.
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We dream to move mountains, not carry them.
Glad you got some sleep.
The repeated line is my favourite, it carries so much weight right to the end~ The shape of background and the lines remind me of the indent left when you drag heavy things across the dirt, and it's awesome!
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"We dream to move mountains, not carry them." -- hear hear!! And I absolutely love your interpretation of the shapes. So brilliantly unique. Fancy that!
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I can feel the weight of the burdens of life on this person's shoulders. Atlas's struggles are too real.
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I'm so gratified to know that that came through clearly! Many thanks, my dear!
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Yes, sometime it does feel like the mountains are on our shoulder. I like this as usual.
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Indeed it does. Glad to hear that you enjoyed it, nonetheless!
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What a strange yet breathtaking picture this paints. The repeated line really ties it all together--I love it
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I'm so glad you enjoyed the ending! That was the bit I liked, also.
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Love it. Really love the metaphor and the idea of weight. I relate to this a lot
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Alas, and yet, so nice to find someone who understands! Here's to you, my fellow sleep-deprived, weight-bearing friend-in-arms, lol.
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