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Published: 2010-01-21 03:44:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 94; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description ~88 - Pain~

Can you feel the agonizing sting,
Some pulsating sound?
Tremoring and shaking before its mighty ring,
What goes, comes around.

Loftly perched on solid pole,
Karma knocks and chips the base,
Miserly I succumb to ironic goals,
And meet the ground with my face.

A swift kick to tender loins,
Bladed knife into my side,
Stolen all but one gilded coin,
With get away car doth collide.

As I lay here I am slain,
Only death can feel my pain.
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Comments: 2

Windfrost [2010-01-21 04:23:43 +0000 UTC]

Love the irony, and the personification. <3 Successful sonnet dear.

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frozen-time In reply to Windfrost [2010-01-21 05:10:17 +0000 UTC]

=3 This one was fun to write.

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