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Published: 2009-11-22 21:02:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 1330; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 972
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Next_NilaI haven't submitted something in a while :c and I clearly don't know how to draw hair/fur/clothes/faces. Haha this looks a bit like a water bottle ad...
Zhanglu + Zhuzhu inspired! c:
Critique this, please?
Edit 11/24/2009: I made her forehead smaller, gave her more defined eyes, and made her left strands of hair less stiff. Better y/n? What more can be improved upon?
Photoshop CS3
5 Hours ish
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Comments: 40
beautiful! I love the colours you used, they really pop out!
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I really like how soft this is, she looks amazing.
The only thing is, I've noticed in a lot of your pictures you a pay a lot of attention to the face but then everything else is less defined, and that sort of takes away a little from the over all picture. OTL
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Yes, you're right 
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Forgive me, she looks a little like Drew Barrymore! Teehee ^^
As usual, I love your skintones and shading. I demand a nose tutorial! Rawr!..
Only critique is maybe the forehead, which is a little high. But that may be characteristic of her, so it's fine, really.
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Lol, thanks Helen!
oh, does she? I thought she looked a little like Britney Speares
Yeah, it is high, which was not my intention, so I will reduce it 
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Haha, thanks for not slapping me for mentioning the forehead (after I read the earlier comments I realize you'd heard it already). Early Happy Thanksgiving, in case I forget later!
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Lol, it's no problem. If anything, you only remind me that she is rather Frankensteinlike.
Aww, thank you! You too! 
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I love the colours you used for her hair, they're so vibrant and pretty and work nicely together.
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I think the only thing is her forehead is a little big, or her hair line might be pulled back to far.
Otherwise you're an amazing artist with incredible talents
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Ah, I see. Someone else has also brought up the largeness of her temple :0
Thanks a bunch!
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No problem my dear (: I want you to excel to the highest points - you have so much talent (:
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i think her forehead looks fine (:
her eyes need more definition, though. eyelashes? ):
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ah, gracias for the guidance, as always, Sheer
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Her forehead is big, I don't know if you intended to do that.
Lovely style and picture as usual.
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hmm, is it too big? D:
thank you!
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No, not too big, but still bigger than usual. Don't worry, it's not bad at all. (:
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i like the ends of her hair - left a bit undefined = painterly. love the purple "highlights" as well
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I like your sort of half-realism drawing style (:
The strands of hair on her left look a bit too stiff/unnatural.
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All right, thanks! I will incorporate your crit into the edit.
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