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The smell burnt into the pillow
The shirt I bought you from London
The note I wrote you on your birthday
The book I thought you would like
I was wrong
The picture of us stanched in the album
The toothbrush left near the sink
The ice cream with the flavor only I liked
The Billy Joel tickets I thought you would like
I was wrong
The movie we left in the middle
The song I sang you in that restaurant
The one joke that made you laugh every time
That marriage proposal I though you would like
I was wrong
The memory of us washed with the waves
The small meaningless love moment lost in time
The one thing we had we thought would never be lost
I thought you wouldn't let me fade away
I was wrong
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Nothing much to add to the poem.
I hope "see it my way".
G
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I shared your work on Tumblr sztormcia.tumblr.com/post/5577...
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Hello gilad,
My name is Nuno Sousa, I'm Portuguese, an art lover and author of a poetry book written in Portuguese. I own a personal web page where I put some of my work. I felt in love with one of your photos named 'Fading away'. I'm kindly asking if you could grant me permission to use this photo in my page (and exclusivelly for this purpose). I thank you in advance.
Link: [link]
My best regards and keep the excelent work,
Nuno
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Hey you! *points* Yeah you.
You have been featured!
[link]
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very nice capture.... this is a great angle... well done.
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I like the relationship between the tones of photos, excellent compositions.
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I absolutely love this picture! And I wanted to let you know that I used it in one of my blogs. I gave credit to you and also linked to your DeviantArt profile. If you would like a link to the blog so you can see for yourself, I can provide you with that. I just wanted you to be aware and it you would like, I can remove the picture.
Also, I just wanted to add again that I really LOVE this picture and the poem as well. Both are amazing!!
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Hello
I'd like to use your wonderful picture to illustrate some poetic work on my personal website (in french).
Would it be ok for you ?
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hi there!
your artwork has been featured here [link]
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Cheers,
I am Emanuel and I am also a Deviant art member that only a few months ago i decided to start share my art with others in the W.W.W. I usually use words to give images more importance, thing that i hardly manage to do with my photos ... but for a strange way is more easy with others' art. So .. this time after a small search, a typical for me work, i found this photo of yours and suddenly i had a small strike of inspiration to write something about that. For sure, as i beleive, the world, our world will be more important and interesting if we could share things and thoughts with others, for that reason i used your photo in my personal blog adding a small melody of a small music box that i believe that can give also soul to your photo too and translated for you in english, [link] , to give a literature soul to the colours ... Forgive my action but if you do not want me to use it, you have every right to advice me to remove it. I am going also to share the things i wrote for it with you too here. Hope that will be enough touchy to worth the imensity of feelings i felt after seeing it some hours ago and for expressing to you my compliments about your art.
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I still think of you
and I cannot sleep
and I don't talk
All the hours that pass by
ask me how much I love you
I met many women, but what to say?
you are the light in the shadows
I still think of you
I am sorry you left
and I get depressed
God, if only
on the empty pillow
I could dream of you
I met many women,
but you are the only one
I will love for as long I shall live
Greetings from Ferrara-Italy.
Emanuel ...
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The first time that I love you, the first time that I know you, the first time in your arms I am born and I die.
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Stunning. Emotionally evocative. Absolutely perfect.
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Hey Gilad! I am creating a small photography course for some people here. Would you mind if I use some of your pictures as examples for different effects? Such as Depth of focus using the picture above?
I think it would be very helpful for people to learn from examples of a great photographer!!
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Amazing photo, and hard-hitting at this sad point in my life. Great work!
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I have featured this lovely deviation in my journal 
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You've got such an amazing eye for a picture, beautiful poem and photograph. The two made me stop, think and feel emotion and I believe that's what makes an amazing picture. Beautiful!
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Hello there.
I'm Thomas from fineart-photography club. I think this photograph is really awsome. Can I add it to our collection ?
=kazakchoc
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Your work has been featured
Thanks a lot.
=kazakchoc
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Very touching, both photo and poem. Sad but yet great concept!
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Hi, your nice work featured here : [link]
Good day !
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that's a beautiful poem and nicely complemeted with the photograph.
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i featured your great work here: [link]
have a nice weekend 
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I like the person fading away, it gives me a twist in my heart. Great photo.
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woow
incredible beautiful shot
great work, amazing
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