Comments: 13
dj-darkviper [2009-04-15 19:51:04 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Originality
Technique
Impact
This profile shot of this character is in short: breathtaking and deserves to be mentioned that there isn't a whole lot wrong with it.
Its obvious by the lack of background that you truely just wanted to emphasis the character and write up a profile, which works fine, but even a simple background gradient or pattern, or even "vital stats" somewhere to fill up the white space would be preferable.
As for the character herself, Im a little concerned about the choice of colour between the fur and on the tail and ears, as opposed to her skin and hair color. They dont exactly mash well to the eye and theres a big conflict over which to focus on.
I love the blue hair, thats a good choice, but id either make her skin darker or play around with other colour options for the tail and ears to help blend her choice in fashion as well.
Speaking of which, the costume is sexy and original. I wouldn't change anything on it. Though when looking at it, the boots arent exactly "symmetrical". The yellow arrows tip on 'her' left boot is noticably shorter (higher up) than the one on 'her' right. I know perspective and forshortening are playing a role here, and its executed pretty well, but thats the biggest omission i can spot.
I dont have much else beyond that, the profile shot definitely works, its well crafted, and the character is original. So for that i give you major props for this accomplishment in a completely over saturated field.
You have both of my thumbs, way way up.
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dj-darkviper In reply to variouslyvaried [2009-04-15 19:43:50 +0000 UTC]
I just wanted to respond that i think you meant "furry art" or "anthropomorphism". "Yiff" is a generalized term for anthropomorphic porn.
For the most part though i think your critique wasn't much of a critique, its can be summed up generally as a normal comment with an emphasis on how much it amazes you.
Try commenting and focusing more on what could be improved while also praising what was done right.
The critique was fair, but not specific to any point.
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variouslyvaried In reply to dj-darkviper [2009-04-15 22:17:08 +0000 UTC]
ohh no man i totally understand, sorry if that came out curt, i really couldn't criticize anything cuz it was really that good
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SolidCocoon [2009-04-19 15:14:11 +0000 UTC]
Superb work, critique was on point.
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GleamingScythe In reply to SolidCocoon [2009-04-19 16:36:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Glad to see you back too, haven't seen you stop by in a while.
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Dinalfos5 [2009-04-16 08:15:23 +0000 UTC]
Oh pretty picture. Her face reminds me a bit of the Princess actually, but I guess its just because they both are young female Wolf Anthros with blue hair. Her outfit looks interesting too, I like the little tiara and her shoulder guard.
Interesting personality and everything, and rivalry with the princess, I can sense some interesting developments with this in the actual books.
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GleamingScythe In reply to Dinalfos5 [2009-04-16 15:47:19 +0000 UTC]
Cool, glad you like how this piece turned out.
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