Comments: 22
SinisterSeduction [2011-10-26 16:16:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm critiquing this because you left it in the Ispirare critique folder.
I know that you're going for a portrait and you're doing a more Roman style of portrait but I'd love to see this finished with the hand and everything fully shaded. That said you're doing an awesome job as far as making a portrait. You might push your tones just a little more like you did around the nose just so that you really are having dark darks and light lights but other than that keep practicing. Your proportions are spot on as far as I can tell and the hair looks awesome.
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great-queen-morrigan In reply to SinisterSeduction [2011-10-27 21:28:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!I'm glad.i submitted it when i started practise portraits and drawing in general after long time when I just painted landscapes.
Oh yes!You made good point with dark and lit places-I didn't contenplate or think about but when I looked at the picture closely I can imagine that the face will be more solid and plastic.Really good idea!thank you as same as for critic!!!!
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rcmc2 [2011-06-08 11:51:12 +0000 UTC]
REALLY nice drawing!!! I really like the "suggestive lines" of her clothing along with the more "finished" face....SUPER WORK!!!!
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PomPrint [2010-11-07 00:26:53 +0000 UTC]
I have no idea why I like this so much, but I do. Perhaps it reminds me of Breugel, or perhaps Bosch. Either way, there is a Flemish feel to it that is very attractive.
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MightyJonE [2010-11-03 22:11:28 +0000 UTC]
nice drawing - i particularly like the fact that you left the shoulder unfinished with only the basic pencil lines - it works really well
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LucasParolin [2010-11-03 11:42:31 +0000 UTC]
very good, I like the black shades... and I like that your drawing is very "loose"
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