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Twenty Three

And here we have what I personally consider the crowning achievement of my web comic writing experience. The rest are crap. Just go home now, folks.

I just...love how utterly easy it was to come up with the idea, and how hilarious it was on paper, and how it still retained that humor when it was turned into a comic like this. As a writer, there is always that little fear of having an artist change something in what you've done, or misinterpret some part you've described for them to illustrate. And sometimes you really hope they take the initiative and improve on what you've done. Because as a writer you're just not confident enough on your words alone.

I had a point there about this strip, but I think it got lost in the epiphany.

Still my favorite of all the ones I ever did. Still proves less is more in terms of dialog. A lesson I still need to learn.

Original Art by Rick Ruiz-Dana [link]

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Twenty Three

And here we have what I personally consider the crowning achievement of my web comic writing experience. The rest are crap. Just go home now, folks.

I just...love how utterly easy it was to come up with the idea, and how hilarious it was on paper, and how it still retained that humor when it was turned into a comic like this. As a writer, there is always that little fear of having an artist change something in what you've done, or misinterpret some part you've described for them to illustrate. And sometimes you really hope they take the initiative and improve on what you've done. Because as a writer you're just not confident enough on your words alone.

I had a point there about this strip, but I think it got lost in the epiphany.

Still my favorite of all the ones I ever did. Still proves less is more in terms of dialog. A lesson I still need to learn.

Original Art by Rick Ruiz-Dana [link]