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HazuraSinner — If Twilight was here she would keep fighting! by-nc-nd

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Description That's why I won't give up!



Rainbow Dash's design for the "what if" story where Twilight Sparkle travels into an alternative and dark future.
A little warning. This concept involves my favorite pairings: Rainbow x Fluttershy, Pinkie x Twilight and Applejack x Rarity. Thou have been warned! XD

Here's the usual summary regarding the character's background:

After hearing from Pinkie Pie about Twilight's disappearance, Rainbow Dash immediately voluntered to help in the search of their friend.
But when Fluttershy fell unexpectedly ill with high fever she had to choose to give up the search temporarily and take the sick girl back home.
When the two pegasi arrive at Ponyville Fluttershy tells Rainbow Dash to not worry about her and to go assist Pinkie and Spike in their quest, but she refused as saw the awful state of her girlfriend and decided to stay to take care of her.
Days after Fluttershy's recovery Ponyville is attacked by the Changelings and the two pegasi along with their friends fought the army and won but almost miraculously.
As the days go by the attacks are more frequent and the folk from Ponyville can barely survive. Rainbow Dash decided that she had to take a stand and organized an army with the people of their town, along with a spying team which was in charge of finding weaknesses from the Changelings.
Thanks to her leadership the townsfolk managed to survive for much longer, and then one day she received news from her spy squad. They had discovered a secret passage which would lead right into the castle in Canterlot.
Rainbow Dash elaborated a plan which was sure to work, and even when Applejack warned she ignored. This time they were going to defeat Chrysalis.
However, her plan failed. Chrysalis and her army was expecting their arrival since the beginning.
Rainbow Dash and her friends fought for their lives but they were in disadvantage and were falling fast at the hands of the Changelings.
And when she saw Fluttershy getting hurt her opponents took the chance and inflicted a dreadful cut on her right eye.
Trying to ignore the pain Rainbow rushed to Fluttershy's side and desperately tried to protect her with just half of her vision working.
The absence of her right eye became a huge blind spot, for she couldn't see a Changeling striking from that side and slicing her right arm.
The mane five managed to return to Ponyville but at a high cost, and Rainbow Dash and Applejack argue with each other about what happened. The farm girl cuts the friendship bonds with the pegasus girl and her other friends follow out, being Fluttershy the only one who stays by her side.
However, one night Rainbow Dash woke up and to find that she left, and the only thing she left behind was the ring Rainbow Dash gave her when she proposed years ago.
At the present, Rainbow Dash still fights the Changelings on her own when they come for a fight and none of them defeated her until now even though she's missing an eye and an arm.

Coming up next is Fluttershy!

Rainbow Dash (My Little Pony) © *fyre-flye , Hasbro
Human concept © me

On my Tumblr page: hazurasinner.tumblr.com/post/6…
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Comments: 142

HazuraSinner In reply to ??? [2017-02-04 12:09:53 +0000 UTC]

It was strangely awesome when saw the resemblances several parts of the season 5 finale had to my dark future AU.

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Racesgirl2000-1 [2016-09-07 11:20:20 +0000 UTC]

Wow, Dash looks totally bad ass here

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Sweater01 [2016-03-23 00:38:30 +0000 UTC]

She's like SAINW Mikey

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TeaCatTeasley [2016-01-09 00:17:23 +0000 UTC]

WOW I JUST REALIZED. THIS LOOKS ALOT LIKE THE CUTIE RE-MARK RD!

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HazuraSinner In reply to TeaCatTeasley [2016-01-09 00:26:24 +0000 UTC]

You mean the other way around, because this was made long before season 5 was even out. XD Still shocked me how quite a few aspects of Sombra and Chrysalis futures had connection to this alternative future I made.

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TeaCatTeasley In reply to HazuraSinner [2016-01-09 01:45:34 +0000 UTC]

Well yeah. I meant it that way, but I guess I didn't really express that well.

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HazuraSinner In reply to TeaCatTeasley [2016-01-09 02:23:36 +0000 UTC]

That's ok.

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fnafpon3 [2016-01-08 19:09:34 +0000 UTC]

big boss is that you

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Starfire7x In reply to fnafpon3 [2016-01-19 16:15:18 +0000 UTC]

No,

























It's the female version of him.

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fnafpon3 In reply to Starfire7x [2016-01-19 18:04:47 +0000 UTC]

i know it's the female version of him but it's still big boss

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Starfire7x In reply to fnafpon3 [2016-01-19 18:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know XD

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Strein86 [2015-12-27 03:05:29 +0000 UTC]

She looks just as aggressive as her "Cutie Remark" counterpart.  Even has a missing limb.

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HazuraSinner In reply to Strein86 [2015-12-27 15:20:33 +0000 UTC]

That's what shocked me the most when I saw the season finale, that Rainbow Dash had quite a few similarities to this version I made a long time ago, even some aspects of the two first alternative futures had similarities.

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BronySketcher7 [2015-10-25 03:24:38 +0000 UTC]

Directed by Michael Neigh................

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TheWanderer93 [2015-09-12 07:25:55 +0000 UTC]

Furiousa, is that you?

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wilnet1tractor [2015-08-31 02:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Major fight.

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EarthyRainbowkitty [2015-05-22 23:16:09 +0000 UTC]

i need to see a fanfiction made of this!

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HazuraSinner In reply to EarthyRainbowkitty [2015-05-22 23:28:14 +0000 UTC]

I've been writing the story due to popular demand, Bonds Unshaken by Time -chapter 1-

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EarthyRainbowkitty In reply to HazuraSinner [2015-05-23 01:14:27 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much








im crying so hard right now!

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BizarooBrainiac [2015-04-03 04:49:59 +0000 UTC]

This world has clearly taken it's toll on Rainbow Dash.
I love the cuts on jeans & left arm show that favors that side in battle.

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ColonelBSacquet [2015-03-25 15:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Fighting better with one eye and one arm than when being completely able-bodied? Fantasy logic, I tells ya.

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CrystalGreene [2015-02-03 16:58:40 +0000 UTC]

Pirate!

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kingrat2 [2014-11-19 04:26:34 +0000 UTC]

were do I read the story?

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HazuraSinner In reply to kingrat2 [2014-11-19 22:20:45 +0000 UTC]

I posted the first chapter a few days ago, you can read it here hazurasinner.deviantart.com/ar…

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S0L0ngP4rtn3r [2014-10-24 03:13:57 +0000 UTC]

Yersh

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Kalusonyatagami890 [2014-07-28 23:06:29 +0000 UTC]

that's me right there still fighting taking revenge

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ColonelBSacquet [2014-07-06 11:10:49 +0000 UTC]

"The farm girl cuts the friendship bonds with the pegasus girl"

Alliance falling apart means lost war.

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RainbowDash420 [2014-06-03 20:29:31 +0000 UTC]

Is this a mgs4 raiden thing??

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HazuraSinner In reply to RainbowDash420 [2014-06-03 21:59:58 +0000 UTC]

No, it's a completely different, read the description please before taking conclusions.

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RainbowDash420 In reply to HazuraSinner [2014-06-03 23:53:14 +0000 UTC]

...DA so uptight these days nvm then

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Blooming-Blossom [2014-05-18 12:36:19 +0000 UTC]

omfg her hand....

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Soulsaber67 [2014-03-13 19:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Now Dashie reminds me of Black Star

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Krazybrony In reply to Soulsaber67 [2014-04-22 23:02:49 +0000 UTC]

yea she dose

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Soulsaber67 In reply to Krazybrony [2014-04-28 20:36:14 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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Krazybrony In reply to Soulsaber67 [2014-05-10 01:14:17 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Soulsaber67 In reply to Krazybrony [2014-05-19 19:20:52 +0000 UTC]

lolol

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Krazybrony In reply to Soulsaber67 [2015-01-20 23:57:19 +0000 UTC]

Lulz

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RainBowDash678 [2014-02-09 20:08:17 +0000 UTC]

reading fluttershys and rainbow dash's made me ball my eyes out.....

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pendrake47 [2014-01-30 18:29:11 +0000 UTC]

HazuraSinner  ...



1. Another good Dark Future (DF) work.


2. Scarring.  Excellent facial detailing with the stitched cut across her right eye.  Another excellent detail are the leg scars showing beneath the torn pants, small subtle details like that are a positive sign of care, effort, and skill in any Artist's works.


3. The harsh stormy background was the correct and strong addition to this work, contributing to the dark theme of the picture and its series.


4. The one minor critique I would put forward, and this is only because of the sword enthusiast (or "sword nerd" ) in me, is DF-Rainbow's sword.  I would have advised a katana with sword-guard and woven grip, over the chokuto ("straight sword") style with its smooth grip.  Why?  Because the latter is designed for ambidextrous swordsmen, with no sword-guard and smoother grip for quicker/easier changing of hands (plus disguising the sword too, of course); also, straight swords are slower on the quick-draw (thus why many swords are curved, regardless of geography & culture).  Regardless of either sword-type, both should be double-edged (meaning both sides blade-sharp) since DF-Rainbow is a one-armed swordswoman, so she can swing her blade in both directions.


5. If you had really wanted to go towards a particularly grim angle, you could have portrayed DF-Rainbow having had her right wing severed in-tandem to her right arm and eye.  That would have definitely topped off the visual impact of a Dark Future Equestria.

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L-MASTER [2014-01-17 05:32:54 +0000 UTC]

extreme O.O

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emtav [2014-01-16 15:10:56 +0000 UTC]

I wonder where these concept came from?

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HazuraSinner In reply to emtav [2014-01-16 16:15:26 +0000 UTC]

The idea of the dark future was sort of inspired by an episode of TMNT, the rest came out naturally.

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emtav In reply to HazuraSinner [2014-01-17 11:50:42 +0000 UTC]

I know an episode in the same version of tmnt where they see nightmares. Also had dark moments. Those episodes didn't get deeper investigation in my opinion.

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Warmandude7 [2014-01-15 17:51:40 +0000 UTC]

Will this be a complete FanFiction? If so, where may I find it once it is completed?

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HazuraSinner In reply to Warmandude7 [2014-01-15 17:57:59 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure yet, and if by any chance I write it down it will be posted here.

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demonpup45 [2013-12-29 04:52:52 +0000 UTC]

That is beautiful!

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Shadows-Truth [2013-12-25 03:21:32 +0000 UTC]

.O. Wow! I love this and the idea for the series! Also, it seems we have the same favorite pairings!

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MayRothwell [2013-12-23 00:55:32 +0000 UTC]

Omg this series is seeming reaaly good! Poor mane 5!

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Tanaka-Sentaro [2013-12-09 21:39:33 +0000 UTC]

This reminds me one of the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles episodes.
Smart one disappeared...can't do anything without him...And global "pizdec" come.

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jonaslion52 [2013-11-24 10:07:36 +0000 UTC]

The scar she has on her eye reminds me of the one big boss will have in MGS5.
Or was this an coincidence
Anyway awsome

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