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Chapter 1
Chapter 2

This one feels sloppier than the first two pages, but when I'm going for a decent quick and rough style, I ought to not care too much about that. The frame format is exactly the same as Page 2... Page 2 was showing her situation inside the Stable, while Page 3 is showing her situation resulting in her outside of the Stable; I wanted them to have a bit of a visual link.

For a maintenance pony, she's not a very good maintenance pony. Frame 3 turned out the best in my opinion.

I'm rushing through the Stable opening parts because they aren't very important to the story. She's narrating a quick overview for now, but a ways later in the story she might have a lot more to detail about her Stable, and this particular mess she was involved in. It's just not relevant until it's relevant, you know?

EDIT --- Fixed some incorrect tense in the narrative. Well, they may have actually been passable in their context, but I made them clearer to the correct tense regardless.

Description
Page 1
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4

Chapter 1
Chapter 2

This one feels sloppier than the first two pages, but when I'm going for a decent quick and rough style, I ought to not care too much about that. The frame format is exactly the same as Page 2... Page 2 was showing her situation inside the Stable, while Page 3 is showing her situation resulting in her outside of the Stable; I wanted them to have a bit of a visual link.

For a maintenance pony, she's not a very good maintenance pony. Frame 3 turned out the best in my opinion.

I'm rushing through the Stable opening parts because they aren't very important to the story. She's narrating a quick overview for now, but a ways later in the story she might have a lot more to detail about her Stable, and this particular mess she was involved in. It's just not relevant until it's relevant, you know?

EDIT --- Fixed some incorrect tense in the narrative. Well, they may have actually been passable in their context, but I made them clearer to the correct tense regardless.