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Published: 2017-01-22 04:19:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 5318; Favourites: 123; Downloads: 0
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Request forHis OC Golden Lily hypnotized by Zecora.
My first full color + background piece, yay! No particular style here, just testing digital
I'm happy I could do this as a request.
As a digital newbie: FEEDBACK PLEASE! I'M DESPERATE! Here is my short screenshot progress:Β LINK
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Comments: 48
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Ah, don't be so self-critical.
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Believe me; I never have the patience to make art like this.
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I'm sure you have something else though. Something that I don't and would really like.
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That, my friend, is your task to find
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This art is very beautiful!! 
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What a shame, but okay, let me know when to open please?
how much is it?
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Hey, I was just wandering around my deviation while I noticed that you actually replied to me. However I didn't get notified about it, it is because you replied to yourself. Remember to click the "reply" button that is under MY avatar ^^
If your still wondering about commissions, here's my commission info page:Β Commission Information (OPEN)
If you need help with anything on Deviantart just let me know! I'm always happy to help!
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Thank you!
My requests are currently closed but I'm hoping to open commissions soon
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Oh Helmie, I just thought up some more help for you with improving how your hair looks.Β The inside of the hair line looks great with all the various strands, but outside the hair's line ( where its all rounded ) it looks too smooth, almost like it was cropped.Β So an easy fix would be to add some hair strands or variances in the hair's curve to help break up that outline.
You can see that being done here in the speed paint of my OC. : www.youtube.com/watch?v=jgEldQβ¦
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You are correct. The thing is that the hair is in a different style than the body, I know, it's very noticeable. I'm currently working on a hairstyle technique that would match that smooth shading (the top of Lily's head looks soooo FLAT *facehoof*). This is why I opened requests
Thank you for the feedback!
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Im also experimenting with a new way to draw hair.Β One style will be used for when I draw more show accurate designs, while the other will hopefully be more realistic.
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..and she's good at it...
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When you awake, you will be like a snake. Slithers across the floor, you will make. Now... AWAKE! *clops hooves together*
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Wait, let me get my popcorn...
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Yeah. I'll bet she's gonna put on quiteΒ the show.
I once saw a hypnotist make aΒ GUY go through the pain of child birth. True story!
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(Alrighty, here's something for you and !)
Golden: *begins to slither across the floor and flicks her tongue out like a snake*
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Heh! Now, can she swallow that ostrich egg? *points*
Thanks for adding me to your watch list.
Don't expect too much new stuff, though.
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Golden: *slithers over to the ostrich egg, sticks out her tongue, and slowly swallows it whole*
Okay then.
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Well, I guess that answers THAT. *looks at the pony, who now looks more like a blimp.* o_o
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Golden: *hisses again*
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this is very well done
the detail in the shading and manes are great
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Thank you, I'm a digital newbie though XD I need a lot of practice.
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if i may, may i request something?
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I'm sorry but my requests are closed for now (due to request overflow owO).
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Really awesome 
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Style? I hardly see any style here, just many concepts mixed together.
Glad you like it!
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I could see Zecora using this method as one of her many tricks, it would definitely be different from the usual potion use. ^^
And sure, I would love to offer some feedback. XD ( Prepare to be destroyed !! ( Not really
Feed Back :Β Zecora's home feels a little empty, while its great to limit the amount of clutter keeping focus on the striped one, and her victim
Really the only other thing I can see improvement on is with the Lily's tail. ( This is something I really struggle with myself,so we can learn together )
But to help give your designs some greater depth, and realism, when a pone like creature is sitting, or if any hair is touching the ground, give the base of the tail some more ( Frayed/curledΒ ) hairs. This not only helps the tail look like its actually touching the ground, it also gives the tail weight.
The closest thing I come find for an example is this. : s-media-cache-ak0.pinimg.com/oβ¦
Hope this all helps ^^
I love how your wings look, Wings are the bane of my existence. I find hands easier to draw, yet I love drawing wings, so challenging yet rewarding to draw. ( for me anyway )Β I will study how you have drawn yours for future references. XD
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Thank you so much for all that feedback, I appreciate it a lot.
True, the background could use more details, more vials, pots, containers, potions, etc. Zecora's hut is filled with those.
The tail, yes, it improves the connection of the character with the background (or just "ground"), great tip and thanks for the example!
I'm surprised you like the wings though, I had no idea what I was doing XD I would be more satisfied with a more "feathery" look.Β
Thank you for all the feedback, you are awesome!
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Looks amazing!
Love how excited Zecura is to be a hypnotist XD
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Thank you!
That's her "thing" after all XD
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Tiz a good thing to be XD
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