Comments: 60
forestsofazure [2010-03-28 15:08:09 +0000 UTC]
it's one of those very few pieces of writing that gave me goosebumps
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Freethepeas [2010-03-07 00:23:47 +0000 UTC]
This is very sensitive and yet harsh at the same time, if that makes any sense. The vulnerability of it makes it really good, as do the compact images and the strict formatting, really makes me want to write something like it (though I don't think I could keep up that structuring with such effective imagery).
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licoricefactory [2010-03-06 15:45:10 +0000 UTC]
that last stanza...wow
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schriftsteller [2010-03-06 05:19:14 +0000 UTC]
Okay, this piece alone warrants a watch.
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krish-x [2010-03-04 12:10:54 +0000 UTC]
i liked the last stanza the best
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ToaAkatsuki [2010-03-01 22:08:44 +0000 UTC]
Sooo~ What happened in November?
This is strong. It's like.. it tells a story, but still leaves a lot to the imagination.
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bright-eyes25 [2010-03-01 16:31:46 +0000 UTC]
beautiful work here.. i love your repetition throughout the piece. something that seems so simple but different to master.
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Stuzzi [2010-03-01 08:30:46 +0000 UTC]
A wonderful tale woven with words, paints a clear naturalistic image in my mind.
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hush-lullaby In reply to Stuzzi [2010-03-04 18:05:31 +0000 UTC]
Ah, thank you so much !
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Stuzzi In reply to hush-lullaby [2010-03-22 10:50:59 +0000 UTC]
You're most welcome!
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AlecBell [2010-02-28 09:05:41 +0000 UTC]
I like the dense, organically rooted imagery, the suggestion that spirit is slumbering still.
Most worthy of a DLD.
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hush-lullaby In reply to AlecBell [2010-03-04 17:56:37 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
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HelzCullen [2010-02-27 23:54:20 +0000 UTC]
I reeeeeeeeally like that last stanza. And now I want to know what happened last November. D:<
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hush-lullaby In reply to HelzCullen [2010-03-01 22:15:31 +0000 UTC]
Gah. You already read it. Ignore what I said in my reply.
Everything got a little colder last November.
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HelzCullen In reply to hush-lullaby [2010-03-03 21:30:41 +0000 UTC]
Kay, it confuzled me nayway.
Yes. Autumn tends to do that. >:l More plz?
Do I have to note you? D:
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bleusman [2010-02-27 21:06:28 +0000 UTC]
Great meter, great flow, great language. Awesome!
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medreaming [2010-02-27 20:03:32 +0000 UTC]
I love how you repeat that phrase over and over.
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linaeria [2010-02-27 01:08:41 +0000 UTC]
beautiful.
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