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Description Xalna's character sheet revamped to show her new design. Hoorays for more detail!




Name: Xalna

Proof of Existence: The Mechanical Tremor

Somebody name: Lana

World: Titan A.E.

Age: 34 (19 when she lost her heart)

Height: 6'

Weight: around 300 lbs (she's partially made of metal, guys)

Power: Earthquakes/Tremors

Weapon: Cybernetic limbs

Power use:

--Xalna controls earthquakes. However, these aren't deep, seismic, plates-actually-moving-past-each-other earthquakes, just superficial/relatively short-ranged earthquakes caused by vibrations applied to any solid surface.

--She uses her cybernetic limbs (which are, in fact, her actual limbs--not items she puts on for battle) to create these vibrations (actually controlled machinations in the limbs, conducted by punching or stomping). There are small spots on the hands and feet of the limbs that create the tremors, but she keeps them covered and protected (either by gloves or boots) because they are easily damaged. The limbs themselves are protected by armor that is worn around the limbs, exposing only the control panel on the back of each.

--She can adjust the strength of these tremors, HOWEVER she can only handle so much power before her limbs shut down (they all pretty much run on the same wavelength, so if one shuts down, the rest go with it), leaving her pretty much useless.

--She can use two limbs to create vibrations on two different surfaces, but it costs energy. So the total power she could ultimately put in one limb would have to be split between two. It would use the same amount of energy, but there would be two less powerful tremors in two different places. This could work with three limbs, or even all four limbs attacking, too...but not only would that be impractical, but it would create three or four fairly weak quakes.

--These earthquakes can only travel in directions (for example, toward her opponent)--she cannot cause an earthquake that affects an entire area (like typical, real earthquakes). She could create several quakes that travel in different directions, but they would be limited to those directions. The distance limit on these quakes varies depending on the strength of the tremor--the stronger it is, the farther it goes. For example, her most powerful quake would travel about a mile, causing extremely far-reaching and devastating damage, but it would drain her completely (so she wouldn't use that unless she absolutely had to do so).

Personality: Xalna is a very serious person. Growing up, she didn't have much chance to play or have fun, so she's used to being studious, serious, and rather mature. Since her siblings were rather playful and rowdy, and she was not in the least, she tried to act as the authority figure and help take care of them when she could. Being invalid, however, she always wished she could be more protective. Hence, as a Nobody she is very motherly and protective of other Org. members. She's more serious about missions and duties, and not only her own. She's rather strict about members doing their own work and doing it well, but she'll step in to help if someone is in serious danger. She also helps instruct new members. However, all of this isn't to say she wouldn't like to let loose and have fun, but she feels she still has to be a voice of reason when she can.

However, most people are only the targets of her motherly side, and very few actually see it expressed. Instead, she is seen as a very stoic, serious, and sometimes harsh figure (when she is less than pleased, she can have a very powerful voice). She is not fast moving, in battle or out, and she has an almost indestructible patience (which one needs when working with Xeth's). She is often to be found overseeing members and situations with with a characteristically grim expression. She rarely smiles, but very occasionally smirks a little when something strikes her as funny (usually Xeth's being ridiculous, or her snapping back at him), or the corner of her mouth will twitch when she is proud of someone or pleased. It's noteworthy to say that she is very intelligent/well-read, and has a great love of learning. She is also capable of coming up with some pretty good one-liners on the spot, but it seems that no matter how much a comment would warrant a grin or some kind of menacing look, she still maintains that same, cold gaze...



Kingdom Hearts-y stuff belongs to Squenix/Disney
Xalna belongs to me

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Comments: 8

IronBrony1981 [2016-08-07 19:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Nice!!

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lwmathews013 [2009-11-04 22:03:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh. My. God.
This. Is. Amazing.
How long did this take? oAo

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hyperionwitch In reply to lwmathews013 [2009-11-04 22:14:07 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, well, the drawn part of it didn't actually take too long. Maybe an evening's worth of work? But the actual layout of the sheet took FOREVER. I did one layout, got most of the way through it, then hated it utterly and had to start over. So I just finished it this morning, actually, adding little details as I thought necessary. XD All in all, it wasn't a HUGE amount of time, but finishing it up was tricksy. lol

And thanks, dude.

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lwmathews013 In reply to hyperionwitch [2009-11-04 22:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow, I wish I could relate, but I'm nothing compared to you ono;
(Would it be alright if you sent the world forms of Narxie to OP? ouo; )

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hyperionwitch In reply to lwmathews013 [2009-11-04 22:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Ahahaha, of course. I'll send a note now.

And shush, you! Be an optimist, you silly.

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lwmathews013 In reply to hyperionwitch [2009-11-04 23:07:28 +0000 UTC]

*TRIES VERY VERY HARD*
Thank you~

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QueenMomi-chan [2009-11-04 20:58:14 +0000 UTC]

DAMN, you make this drawing stuff look EASY!

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LunaticStar [2009-11-04 19:44:52 +0000 UTC]

That is an awesome coat.

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