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I-TwistedFury-I — Tirone (Tenebrus Tone), New And Improved!
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Published: 2012-06-22 00:57:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 839; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 10
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After Taking a poll i decided to change up my OC a little..What do ya think? Is it a change for the better?
Would Approve?
Tenebrus Tone (aka Tirone) Is a Unicorn from Manehattan, His cutie mark is a Vector (clever i know
) He's a pretty outgoing stallion once you get to meet him other wise he is more of the strong silent type. He can usually be found at the clubs hanging with Vinyl Scratch ( His longtime crush 
) and thats all the bio i have for now..
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Comments: 13
Atta boy!
Vision: Pretty much the same as before, I definitely see that you set out to make a cool OC and succeeded.
Originality: You made a great decision changing his mane color, and the other additions are welcome and help him stand out a bit more. I like the now symmetrical cutie mark with the two different arrows, and the glow stick necklace does make him seem like the type of stallion that would hang out at the club with Vinyl Scartch.
Technique: It could just be me, but I think the lines look a little sharper and more clean, so your technique appears to have improved a little.
Impact: When I first saw him, he stuck out because of how I couldn't stop staring at his copy/pasted mane. Now he sticks out because of his actual appearance, and the little details help give him a good personality without needing a description.
Overall: A great re-do of your first design, and one that will assuredly be going in my faves.
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And yes, Scratch would approve.
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Thanks! I really worked hard on e'm so it feels good to get a 5 Star Critique!
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I'll think that I'll add your OC in the story. But I'm not sure yet.
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so handsome
got to have it for my personal collection of OC favorites
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Whoa, your OC is awesome :'D if you like Role play, you should check out my friend's group 
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Thanks! ill check it out
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