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Icesturm In reply to Eisschweif [2017-02-03 22:53:06 +0000 UTC]
Jup, die hatten da aber andere Boote, wie mir auch gerade auffΓ€llt xD
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Mrgreen36 [2016-12-27 20:42:09 +0000 UTC]
I like the whole gothic look to this image especially the colours which are perfect for the mood you're trying to create.
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Maleiva [2016-12-10 02:04:13 +0000 UTC]
Whoa! Amazing! It's so beautiful!Β
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suki42deathlake [2016-12-05 22:18:16 +0000 UTC]
lovely piece, loving the toneΒ you put in the piece^^
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TheTigerMaster [2016-11-25 15:30:27 +0000 UTC]
I like how intense this picture is. Will the ship make it or will it be overtaken by the sea! Haha, you did a really nice job at conveying the sense of danger.
Well done!
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CrystalEnceladus [2016-11-25 05:55:51 +0000 UTC]
Great piece, from the texture of the wood to the rigging to the patterns and shape of the water.Β There's a bit of mystery; what is that stadium-like building in the middle of nowhere.
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Saywinter [2016-11-25 05:31:20 +0000 UTC]
Nice one ! just keep it up ^^
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Shadowtails-Derol [2016-11-25 03:40:12 +0000 UTC]
This looks amazing! I don't often see people do water effect so greatly! Amazing!
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Zigholtul88 [2016-11-24 20:12:34 +0000 UTC]
Honestly I can't quite critique this one, seeing how everyone else beat me to the punch and if anything from what I'm seeing, this turned up rather good in my opinion, especially since it only took around 25 hours. Though to be fair I'm just now starting to experiment with adding backgrounds to some of my artwork, which is one of things I'm kicking myself for not practicing with them during my earlier years.
Upon further inspection, I'm actually getting more of a Dark Souls 2 vibe from this pic in regards to the ship and Colosseum in the background, both of which are featured within the game (along with some rather easy bosses).
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Zigholtul88 In reply to Icesturm [2016-11-24 20:31:37 +0000 UTC]
Dark Souls 2 is one of those games that you either love or hate. For me its a mixed bag of awesomeness and neat ideas, while at the same time presents its fair share of inane bullshit and what in the hell were the developers smoking. Which I've yet to beat due to complete boredom and most of the boss fights can be completed by simply poking them in the butt about several dozen times. Rinse and repeat, with the occasional "That One Boss" encounter.
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midnightgravedigger [2016-11-24 18:16:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow, the composition of this picture is really quite interesting. Although I think I would have liked it an awful lot more if its' appearance looked a little more traditional. To me digital art still seems to have that plastic look about it; and I'm never going to like that. But like I said, it's a really good composition; and would make a really good picture if the digital appearance of it wasn't quite so obvious.Β
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Icesturm In reply to midnightgravedigger [2016-11-24 18:55:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot! Making 3D art look traditional is very difficult, if not impossible actually, because the computer calculates every shadow and reflection perfectly. I do see what you mean, but sadly don't think that I could pull that off.
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midnightgravedigger In reply to Icesturm [2016-11-25 16:31:12 +0000 UTC]
Well I have seen quite a few digital pictures that look pretty close to appearing as if they were done traditionally, you probably just need a little more practice before you start producing pictures of that quality.Β
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Will-Erwin [2016-11-24 17:58:02 +0000 UTC]
Hi there! This is a great piece. Here are some thoughts I have on it:
I'll start with what I like, and there's a lot to like here. The water, as mentioned by another comment, is fantastic. The wave shape is fantastic, and its glossy surface, while not realistic, lends a great deal to the other-worldliness of the image. The ship is just fantastic. I love the lights around the stern, the rough wood texture, and the details in the wake. The closed gun-ports are another great touch. The weather is superb, with just enough detail to be interesting without being distracting in the cloud texture and rain effects. I quite like the lightning, too.
I do have some suggestions for improvement based on some unrealistic aspects of the image. My first is to make your wind direction consistent. IfΒ the wind is pushing the sails, then the flag at the top of the ship should be billowing in the same direction that the sails are being pushed. Likewise, the tilt of the rain should be in the same direction. Similarly, there's an issue with the edges of the sails themselves. I like that you've given them a jagged character, but if you have a flap of unsupported sail, it should be billowing forward, not staying rigidly with the rest of the sail. You're missing some ropes as well. Multi-masted sailing ships had ropes running from the tip of the bow up to near the tops of each mast in order to hold those masts in place. These masts are unsupported, which knock them over and tear big holes in your ship, especially in bad weather. Additionally, in the windy conditions of rough seas, sailing ships tend to reduce the amount of sail they have spread to limit the stress on the masts, but you have all sails set. Also, there are no sailors on your ship, which is a little odd.
My last suggestion concerns the water itself. As I said earlier, I like the water, and if you're satisfied, then by all means keep it as is. If you're looking for realism, however, then I suggest the following. First, consider reducing the glossiness of your water. In the rain, the surface texture of the water won't be smooth and shiny; it'll be bumpy from millions of raindrops hitting it, cavitation from the wind blowing over it, et cetera. Second, consider adding white caps to the tops of the waves, and consider making waves without white caps have fairly sharp edges; it's just what waves look like at sea. As for the falling water, it has a tendency to reduce visibility; I'd consider dulling parts of the image that are more distant.
Really, though, these suggestions are nitpicks. The overall image conveys a strong sense of mystery, adventure, and braving the elements. This is a great piece as is, and I congratulate you on its quality.
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TheeArtist85 [2016-11-21 01:01:58 +0000 UTC]
wonderful job on the water
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DreamPigment [2016-11-20 16:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Cool!Β
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