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#blue #digital #flower #ginger #hair #illustration #orange #portrait #red #summer
Published: 2016-08-31 14:50:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 24611; Favourites: 818; Downloads: 0
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So glad I finished this, I almost didn't because I didn't like the original composition. I'm so happy with it now though C:A larger image of this can be found on my WYSP (Da doesn't let you view large on your profile if its bigger than 900px )
www.wysp.ws/post/697681001/
Edit fixed the weird highlights, collar bone, added some shadows, the head shape, arm wrist and armpit!
Thank you for all the feedback
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Comments: 86
I think it could looks better if a darker or lighter color was used for outline instead of black, this looks unpleasant on the left arm going up to the chest, as well as bottom right elbow and right fingers.
The part where the background color seeps into the joint area to create the arm shape looks unpleasant so maybe use a very slightly darker skin tone instead to create the illusion of the shape.
This is a very unique piece where most people like it just because it looks pleasant so it will take trial and error to fix unpleasant looking areas as well as perfecting the style.
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Summer looks identical to someone in my past and even shares the same name! The colors for her hair really bring the focus to her face and those big gorgeous eyes. Her facial posture and gaze coupled with the hair in her hand are captivating. Her focus tells pretending to be apathetic because she is just a little shy.
I do find the triangle tattoo on her right should distracting and not sure what the significance is to the piece. Try outlining her hair on her right shoulder like you did on her left shoulder. I have a hard time seeing the difference between her hair and right shoulder. You nailed it on her left shoulder, excellent work there.
Over all I think this is a fantastic example of your skills and I would definitely hang this in my house or office.
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Friend, I know I've said this many times, but you and your work is amazing! Please keep it up!
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No problem, you deserve it ^^
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Lovely! I really like the headband with little flowers as well as the subtly printed top! I also like the lineart changing colours, however, the part where it's black (jaw, neck) looks a bit too contrasting to me in comparison with the rest but maybe that's a matter of personal preference : ).
Anyways, great gallery and art style!
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I love the way you draw! The eyes and hair are so compelling.
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You will now be one of the people I look up to as I continue to try harder. I love the style this piece has. It's comforting? I don't know my way around words but I like it.
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Aww thats a lovely comment! Thank you
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What I say, I mean. You're welcome.
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Maybe you need some work on anatomy, but the colors already good for me ^^ keep up the good work!
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Very nice, though the upper arm seems to taper too drastically.
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Your art is amazing I even have hard time explaining why haha
I love how you paint the faces and how they express so much
Keep the amazing work ~♥
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I WANT TO DROW LIKE THIIIIS! *sits and cries like a baby*
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I'm sure you can with practice
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Same, I think I've figured out my thing now
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This drawing is gorgeous! It's so soft and I love her expression:3
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I feel like the wrist and forearm are unfinished, but I love the rest.
She has an awesome face
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Its funny because thats my favorite part of the painting
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I'm colorblind so I have trouble with shades etc...but for me, that area is so light it stands out from the rest of the piece without what I think would be an appropriate amount of shading or shadow in the rest of the work.
You know what my fave part is
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Colorblind?
Yes I am.
If we're ever stuck in an elevator with a bomb and I have to cut the green wire....we're dead
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Its okay, I can see colours lol
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Yeah but in this scenario you're tranquilized by an evil genius and I am your only hope.
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I saw this on /r/All and this is simply amazing, I love it so much. Very nice job
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I can't believe my work got to /r/all ;A: its mental!! I keep getting like, 50 comments.
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So beautiful! I really like the colors you used, the dull reds and blues really give this piece and calm and summer feel.
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I love warm and cool colours together, its a fun combo
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