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Published: 2018-10-10 21:11:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 10305; Favourites: 122; Downloads: 9
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Geez Adi. That's rude.

Sri's face in the fifth panel though. "Bitch what you just say?"
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XSamuraiEdgeX [2023-12-19 14:35:59 +0000 UTC]

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Diznits [2021-10-05 14:25:53 +0000 UTC]

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ClubCookieKira [2019-07-25 09:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


First of all, the vision I had on this page was riveting and jaw-dropping. The lightning and colors of the coming night help set the stage to perfection. The facial expressions make it all too real for the audience that reads it and the anatomy is inspiring. However, I do see room to grow by testing the widths of the backgrounds, testing out new colors pallets, and perhaps a touch more on the shading.

The shading was magnificent and makes the piece come alive - as did the very subtle grass in the last panel. I can see the emotions through the characters with their faces and bodily positions. Truly an inspiring read.

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LilySketchesWarriors [2019-10-31 16:47:39 +0000 UTC]

EXCUSE mEEEE

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thatguybrody [2019-10-28 03:12:34 +0000 UTC]

well i mean he has a point.

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Detrah [2018-10-18 11:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow Adi, didn't know losing a child was a competition. 

Love Sri's design! What a beauty. 

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IndiDreamer In reply to Detrah [2018-10-18 13:04:26 +0000 UTC]

"You had a bad day? Well let me tell you about MY bad day!"

Thank you. <3

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pinocchioo65 [2018-10-13 12:10:42 +0000 UTC]

what is the most difficult to live? to see your child die after knowing him or seeing your child die before having known him? I think it's about almost equal.

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IndiDreamer In reply to pinocchioo65 [2018-10-13 17:46:42 +0000 UTC]

I personally wouldn't turn it into a contest, 'cause tragedies are going to be handled differently by everyone regardless.

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SleepySundae [2018-10-11 22:05:47 +0000 UTC]

It's all subjective, but I think getting to know your kid and then losing it is worse than losing an unborn child.  Sure, he lost his mate, too, but still.  Trying to say he's in more pain than she was is pretty dickish.  Though I guess you tend not to have a filter when you're borderline suicidal.

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IndiDreamer In reply to SleepySundae [2018-10-11 22:34:34 +0000 UTC]

I myself am of the opinion that no one should really try to claim their situation is 'worse.' Especially when it comes to such serious matters like the loss of a loved one. It's all heartbreaking, and everyone will handle it differently.

But yeah, at the same time so close to a tragedy folks ain't gonna be thinking very clearly. XD

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SheraWolf7 [2018-10-11 14:11:56 +0000 UTC]

Well yea it it does. you got to have a kid he lost a wife and a kid so yea it is harder fore him . (im detecting a second love) 

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IndiDreamer In reply to SheraWolf7 [2018-10-11 19:09:54 +0000 UTC]

Granted downplaying anyone's kid dying is still pretty rude. And second love?

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SheraWolf7 In reply to IndiDreamer [2018-10-12 01:03:16 +0000 UTC]

yea. also that is just my shiping comming into action. we have never seen any other character that had much of a page besides the dogs so im assuming this will be a character later down the line but that just me  

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MortemTheAssassin [2018-10-11 01:36:41 +0000 UTC]

Get him Sri 

I love your use of color! Gah this comic is beautiful <3 I always get excited when I see this notification pop up in my inbox!

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IndiDreamer In reply to MortemTheAssassin [2018-10-11 01:39:18 +0000 UTC]

She gon' beat 'em up.

Aww, thank you! I worry sometimes the colors might be a bit much, but I'm glad people are enjoying them so far!

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wolfra315 [2018-10-10 23:23:16 +0000 UTC]

i really like the shading and ground detail and the body movement accompanied bye what there emotions are. if I'm being honest and I don't mean any thing bad I'm not trying to sound no it all the tree leafs seem to look more like green clouds but like I said before everything else love it and I really like this comic

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IndiDreamer In reply to wolfra315 [2018-10-11 00:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And no offense taken, I appreciate constructive criticism.

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wolfra315 In reply to IndiDreamer [2018-10-11 13:21:41 +0000 UTC]

ok I cant wait for what happens next but I will say this oh I've been hit right in the feels bye the new page 

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rayxill [2018-10-10 22:43:26 +0000 UTC]

wreck him Sri
This is a very pretty comic! Enjoying it

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IndiDreamer In reply to rayxill [2018-10-10 23:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Kick his arse!

Thank  you!

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Flora-Tea [2018-10-10 21:34:22 +0000 UTC]

Ouch...;;

Also, I really like Sri's design! She reminds me of fawn Faline from Bambi

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IndiDreamer In reply to Flora-Tea [2018-10-10 21:37:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank ya! After I drew her as a background character in comic for the first time I did think to myself, "Damn, she looks too much like she's from Bambi, I should change her." But then I never did and then I got to this scene and was like, "Okay well I guess she's just gonna be from Bambi." XD

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Flora-Tea In reply to IndiDreamer [2018-10-10 21:56:43 +0000 UTC]

Anytime!

Hahaha! I actually like that she reminds me of a Bambi character XD gives her design a nostalgic and charming touch I feel ^_^

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IndiDreamer In reply to Flora-Tea [2018-10-10 21:57:40 +0000 UTC]

XD Suppose that works, then!

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carnivalwoods3 [2018-10-10 21:31:47 +0000 UTC]

that really was rude Adi but I guess it's because you're grieving 

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IndiDreamer In reply to carnivalwoods3 [2018-10-10 21:36:36 +0000 UTC]

He is being a very rude boi.

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carnivalwoods3 In reply to IndiDreamer [2018-10-10 21:39:22 +0000 UTC]

ya he is he's gonna get kicked soon 

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Songdogx [2018-10-10 21:17:56 +0000 UTC]

Kick his face in.

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IndiDreamer In reply to Songdogx [2018-10-10 21:19:00 +0000 UTC]

She's considering it.

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