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DNA-The-Authoress [2011-12-28 03:33:32 +0000 UTC]
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This is such a crushing scene. In two panels we are overwhelmed with more emotion than many movies convey in two hours.
The first panel we see a devastated but resolute John addressing Sherlock. "I was only away for five minutes, Sherlock." What happened during those five minutes that could have John looking this weary and heartbroken? Is Sherlock dead? Injured? John's posture is erect, confident (or perhaps, like I said before, resolute), but his face, especially the eyes and eyebrows, show his devastation.
Then we go down to the next panel and see something (through John's eyes) even worse than true death- Sherlock transformed into a zombie. His gaunt figure is now twisted and falling apart- his wan skin now grey with death. His normally perfect clothes are bloodied and tattered. In short, John's worst fears realized. The mottled greys, vague shadows of zombies, and tilted angle of the background as well as the rain contribute to the atmosphere. John's bitter comment- "Five bloody minutes" and his hand and gun in the foreground fill the viewer with an impending sense of finality- we know that while John loves Sherlock (whether as a friend or something more is left for us to decide), John will ultimately make the best decision for the both of them and pull the trigger, though who knows what he'll do next. He may become embittered but even more determined to survive. He may turn the gun on himself.
This is among one of the best pieces in your gallery and one that I for one do not tire of studying.
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locknessmonster292 In reply to DNA-The-Authoress [2012-10-15 01:17:12 +0000 UTC]
But I really did like this critique, it sort of made the picture better (which I didn't think was possible)
But yeah sorry.
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inklou In reply to DNA-The-Authoress [2011-12-28 04:39:50 +0000 UTC]
Man, I honestly have no idea how the critique system works on dA until you actually gave me one! xD So do I have to like, click 'fair' or something in order for it to be displayed underneath the deviation? That's a tad useless isn't it? I mean, if the artist is butt-hurt and clicks unfair, it won't show up, and that particular critique can't be judged by a third person...can it? o_o
Aside from that, THANK YOU FOR THE CRITIQUE (and man your writing's wonderful). It's a very accurate portrayal of my thoughts when I made it. I'm surprised you have nothing negative to say about my piece LOL //shot
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smpte [2017-08-19 23:38:42 +0000 UTC]
iconic
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Aliz4 [2017-08-16 18:59:14 +0000 UTC]
That's awesome!
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tultsi93 [2017-02-10 08:59:52 +0000 UTC]
So sad. You have beautiful style.
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gamef0x [2016-10-12 01:41:16 +0000 UTC]
I want to know the story behind this. Well, so long as it's a good ending. I have read one fic where sherlock is a zombie but he's more aware than most and even though he has trouble keeping his thoughts, has no memories and expressing himself properly...he still follows John around. For now I'm going to pretend this is a scene from that fic because it really needs a story so badly.
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Waterlou25 [2015-11-25 05:42:55 +0000 UTC]
Okay so you have some serious talent wow
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TMNTMoonkitteh [2015-05-25 21:04:38 +0000 UTC]
I can't tell if John is crying or not but, brilliant work! The art is amazing, the emotions are clear through out only 2 panels, I wouldn't be surprised if you work for a big name comic industry or something like one!
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Sobrancelia [2015-01-06 18:36:07 +0000 UTC]
can somebody write a book about the Zombie-Lock apocalypseΒ please!!!
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LilianettyPR [2014-11-25 19:57:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh my!!! This is brilliant!!!!! And yes, The Walking Dead make many suffer coz of that (turning our faves on zombies...why??!!??) x) By the way, amazing art style!
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Jhugs [2014-10-22 01:51:17 +0000 UTC]
Okay this is a more reaistic title to give this:
FEELS FEELS FEELS CRY CRY CRY TEARS
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For-The-Darkspear [2014-05-27 20:38:29 +0000 UTC]
That is so like Sherlock to go and turn so exceptionally quickly. I bet zombie sherlock stumbles around going "Boooooored...."
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stuff-I-do [2014-03-14 03:08:48 +0000 UTC]
SOPHIA Β
you are excellent for this.Β
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Lara00 [2013-11-16 16:53:55 +0000 UTC]
Know that story bro xD
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alicy-sunberg [2013-09-06 17:40:34 +0000 UTC]
oh that's really good ... but REEEEEEEEEEEEAALLLY depressing...
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aliencatx [2013-08-20 17:47:09 +0000 UTC]
this is so amazing, BBC needs to do a epp like this!Β
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crazyzukofangirl1280 In reply to aliencatx [2013-09-25 05:35:50 +0000 UTC]
I don't good idea...remember who writes for Sherlock...think that's a b
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DemonicAngelRampage [2013-08-17 22:03:16 +0000 UTC]
The feels you give me... THE FEELS!!!
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Magialuna [2013-08-03 18:58:26 +0000 UTC]
This is quite awesome. Β I have read a fanfic that fits this actually and it wasn't sad!!! I wish Β I remembered what it was called, maybe I'll hunt it down -- if I do I'll come back and note it. Β It was on AO3 and in it Sherlock was actually in disguise-- as he does in the stories so brilliantly... : ) Β Of course as he's sort of a knucklehead sometimes he almost gets shot because he doesn't TELL John he's NOT DEAD until he' s nearly made that way BY JOHN lol... but he wouldn't be Sherlock if he wasn't a bit oblivious about some things eh? Β : ) Β LOVE THIS. Β You are very talented!!
Clare
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Pandadrake [2013-07-11 19:39:17 +0000 UTC]
I find this more funny than sad because it's like "GOD DAMN IT SHERLOCK WHAT DID YOU DO!?!"
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kassey2000 [2013-07-07 09:09:21 +0000 UTC]
Could I make a Fanfic of this?
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Burningplain [2013-06-19 01:10:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh god the feels...
But really great piece. Still the feels.
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Burningplain [2013-06-19 01:08:11 +0000 UTC]
My heart strings... damn it.
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hackney5 [2013-05-01 16:20:43 +0000 UTC]
I LVE SHERLOCK AND THE WALKING DEAD AND DOCTOR WHO!!!!! And this piece!
I love you in a totally friend sort of way even if I only found your stuff an hour ago!!! I love your work!!! Aaaah!
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rababco [2013-03-25 23:37:07 +0000 UTC]
This is so emotional and heart-breaking. It's so true too, that's a famous line of Watson's. The way he points his gun at his best friend and only true friend, the person that he loves the most, who he's been inseparable with, now he has to turn on and shoot him. The person he trusted with his very life, who promised he'd never leave him and always be there to protect him has now turned on him. The guilt and betrayal John must be feeling.
The only thing that doesn't make sense is that it takes more than five minutes for someone to be bitten and turn (in The Walking Dead one man was sick for several days, until he just asked them to leave him on the side of road.) My thoughts are that Sherlock had been bitten and was sick and dying, but Watson being the loyal friend and doctor he was, helped care for him because he didn't have the heart to kill Sherlock even though he knew their was no hope for him. Then he left for a few minutes for more supplies or something, and by the time he came back Sherlock had already turned.
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Miryel-89 [2013-03-20 20:51:33 +0000 UTC]
awesome work
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Link24656 [2013-02-13 10:45:45 +0000 UTC]
Epic!
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amaryllis-fi [2013-01-29 22:32:03 +0000 UTC]
oh no xD where do you get your great ideas... and of course, your style is amazing!
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IbiteU [2013-01-29 12:51:17 +0000 UTC]
This is seriously amazing..
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Atsyrc [2013-01-25 00:02:13 +0000 UTC]
Five miutes sherlock! what the hell! lol
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a-cat-with-13-lives [2013-01-24 01:58:03 +0000 UTC]
You're this one, too?
Too many emotions.
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