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Published: 2004-04-15 14:31:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 932; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 244
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One of my new work a again used a terragen render i hope you like it and i also workt on my starfield etc. I've workt about 7 hours on it the render + the rest
it was reallly fun to make this but now i'm out of insperation and i'm a bit down to, i don't know why but i hope it get better soon favs and comments are welcome, watch at FULL view !
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I don't really understand what the title has to do with my destiny, would you care to explain it to me?
Anyway, I think you need to do something more with your pictures. What you got here is a starfield, two planets and a terrain. If it was immensily well done, I wouldn't mind. But everything here is pretty average, and that is your biggest problem imo.
Also, you've got some things in your picture which need improvements:
- The starfield. The starfield needs diversifying - four brighter flares is not enough. Most of the stars here are pretty much the same brightness, and that's neither realistic nor pretty. Also, you've managed to get rid of most twin-stars, but there are still some remaining left.
Also, the transition between the star-glow and the dark spots is not the best. Needs some work.
- The bigger flare. You have obvious layer-problems there. You can actually see some sharp straight edges where the flare stops to shine, and that is really important to get rid of. It seems to me as if you've worked on a small canvas, and then moved the flare into the main picture. My only advice is to fix the whole thing, erasing the edges with a soft brush wont do any good.
- The shadows on the bigger planet. They don't look right to me. You might have been a bit quick at the brushing there, 'cos it's not round, it's more straight, and that's no good. Also, you could try lowering the opacity at the shadows to 90-95%, people wouldn't mind seeing a bit more of the planets texture (which is quite good actually).
That's about it. I hope you use this critique to improve your coming works. The only way to improve as an artist is to use your critique in the right way.
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thx for the tips and i will work on it. About the name, thats somthing like the way to your destiny
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Wow, that is amazing stuff. Looks like you went there and took a photo
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Wow. Nice. It's like the land is opening a path for you to come and to venture out...to find your destiny...and whatever it is, you keep going...and it will keep going...to the end of time. and space... Wonderful picture.
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lol nice story , ' Look beyond what you see '
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terragen is a really cool program but i can not figure out how to use it so ill stick to bryce.Nice work here the space scenes arent the easiest things in the world to do...so ya great job here really looks awsome.
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I find the horizon cuts off a little too close to the camera and lacks a little depth. other that that i like the planet work.
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Lokos good man - don't really like the flare but overall it's got a good feel to it - nice work
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ffs, F A B U L O U S ! ! ! Those planets, textures on the planets, mountain and HUGE AMAZING STAR IN THE MIDDLE are !a w e s o m e! , 
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Extremely awesome flare & planet textures, would think about the starfield a bit more though.
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Wicked. Love the texture on the planets. The satrfield is nice and the pink-ish glowy thing is great too. Awesome work mate!
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not bad man, the stars are quite nice, infact very nice looks great as a while image. . . . nice TG
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OMG SO FUCKING SWEET
this is so mutherfucking awesome so i will gonna add this fucking sweet art to my fucking favs list because i'm so fucking suprised that their exist so fucking sweet arts
(sorry about the much times that i say fuck if ya don't understand what i'm saying it means=i like it
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central flare is good, very good. terragen render is awesome, adds to the piece completely. although i think u shud try summit new with the planet textures.
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Very good great work on the plant and starfield well done!
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great job man, the starfield, planet, etc. its all sweet, and i especially love the star in the center woah 
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awesome work mate
love your planets and starfield
+fav
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