Comments: 19
Hethroz [2019-05-19 17:33:15 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I’m from ProjectComment .
This artwork of yours is good. I’m a casual fan of Undertale and its many, many Alternate Universes, but I think that you did the artwork for this AU very well. There are a few problems with it, however.
Firstly, I feel as though the characters are too stiff and/or awkward in some areas, Sans especially. The position of Sans’ body makes his arms look stiff and awkward. A potential fix for this could be adding more of a curve to Sans’ body.
Gaster’s shoulder (the one facing the viewer) looks like it is bit too far. Simply moving it to the right a bit more would solve that issue. Papyrus seems to be okay as I don’t see anything wrong with him. Now onto the next part.
Okay, this may not be a problem and more along the lines of how you do things. In the background, what I assume to be a sunset, the colors aren’t blended well enough to look like a sunset. Instead, upon first viewing this piece, I thought it was a beach with waves. A smoother blend of colors can fix that. Before adding the stars, you can use a Gaussian Blur or, if you don’t have and/or don’t want to use any blur effects, lower the opacity of the brush to smooth out the color into a gradient. At the same time, I feel as though the background has done its job decently enough. The background just has room for improvement.
Aside from the background and some issues with the characters, this piece has a good emotional heart to it. I feel as though it is supposed to be a bitter-sweet moment similar saying finally goodbyes. I enjoyed this art at the very least. Keep practicing, improve your style, and I look forward to what you make in the future.
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Itorilan In reply to Hethroz [2019-05-20 12:15:38 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much for your comment!
Im happy you added really helpful advices there. I'll accept your critics and try your advices in my future works.
Also thank you for liking my drawing!
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DemonFall [2019-05-04 18:12:54 +0000 UTC]
Ah...Undertale...
Besides this piece bringing
back memories, the composition
is very interesting and intriguing!
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KoreOfEmAll [2019-04-12 16:02:44 +0000 UTC]
Nice artwork. It's neatly drawn and their faces show a calm, yet thick emotional atmosphere.
Nice job m8.
Oh. And uh... is there any chance you could tell me how to find mad gaster in the game?
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KoreOfEmAll In reply to Itorilan [2019-04-15 04:00:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Can't say I blame you for not knowing about gaster.
I did some YouTube searching, and not even the slightest hint as to how to fight him. Just seeing him for a few seconds right before he vanishes was all I could find.
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Itorilan In reply to KoreOfEmAll [2019-04-15 04:37:33 +0000 UTC]
yeah I kinda saw that too when I was searching about him one day.
I was thinking maybe that is all we could do for him, and kinda make me sad.
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KoreOfEmAll In reply to Itorilan [2019-04-15 20:31:59 +0000 UTC]
...well, don't give up hope. Or as someone from undertake might say, don't give up determination.
Maybe they'll put him in a chapter of Delta Rune. There's a good chance of it happening, as far as I can see.
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Itorilan In reply to KoreOfEmAll [2019-04-16 01:54:22 +0000 UTC]
that's right.
Deltarune is not over yet. I hope they will uncover more secrets from undertale
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KoreOfEmAll In reply to Itorilan [2019-04-16 18:57:51 +0000 UTC]
Yep. After all, Krys is the angel from the legend they talked about in undertale.
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ElectroSkull64 [2019-04-11 16:41:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow this is pretty amazing ^^
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Itorilan In reply to Taleea [2019-03-05 11:19:49 +0000 UTC]
Cant wait! hahaha. I dont have any opinion about them though.. really.. real... ugh.. well.. a tiny bit. Buttttt, let's just see XD
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Taleea In reply to Itorilan [2019-03-06 06:32:03 +0000 UTC]
Sure thing. ^^
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