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Published: 2016-02-24 06:56:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 21439; Favourites: 156; Downloads: 24
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More set up. This stuff takes so long! Arg. Also, gratuitous flirting for the win!.... also, smoking is bad for you. This Frisk likes tempting the reaper so, yeah, I thought it made sense with how she's supposed to act.
Prolog: fav.me/d9qoitm
Page 1: fav.me/d9saxsh
Page 2: fav.me/d9sevgd
Page 2 Censored: fav.me/da45veo
Page 3: fav.me/d9sjtl0
Page 4:You are here
Page 5 Censored: fav.me/da45vo2
Page5: fav.me/d9tczlaUndertale © Toby Fox
Special thanks to who helped create the premise for this story. You rock out loud!
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eeeehh, she can just reset and all the damage will reverse.... right?
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No because that would reset the entire timeline to when she fell. The comic acknowledges this.
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I meant the smoking damage would reset if she reset.
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I know. But I'm saying that she wouldn't because of that.
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So Frisk has taken up cigarettes, and no one remarks on this self-destructive habit? She does use mouthwash afterwards so Toriel doesn't find out?
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It gets brought up again later ^_^
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lol, yes, Frisk has evolved into a flirting fiend ^_~
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don't smoke it will literally set you're lungs on fire unless you're a skeleton
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I don't know about setting your lungs on fire, but yeah, it's not good for you.
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good for the lips not the hips
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Well, frisk says bad words, smokes and now flirt with everyone in their way...
NO PLEASE NO WHERE IS THAT SWEET CHILD OF THE UNDERTALE
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Oh dear me, this version of Frisk is 24 I believe at this point in the comic. In the prolog she's about 10. Hmmm, perhaps I didn't make that clear. She has had a very ruff time of it, what with the perpetual presence in her mind telling her to kill everyone she loves. If you want a sweet innocent child version of Frisk, this comic is not for you. I might recommend this comic for a cute kid Frisk
But, for the most part, I portray Frisk as an adult, a flirt, mentally tortured, and trying to cope as best they can... also mostly a female though I've tried my hand at the gender neutral version a few times. Next I hope to try a male version. There are just so many wonderful versions of all of the characters, it's hard for me to choose just one *^_^*
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It’s funny that there’s such a strong perception among some that Frisk is supposed to be some angelic cherub of pure innocence considering the litany of douchebaggery they can indulge in even in a pacifist route, including but not limited to:
- Hitting on Toriel after calling her Mum.
- Battering monsters to the point of surrender (and taking their money while they're at it).
- Taking a piece of the snowman then eating it in front of him.
- Letting Monster Kid fall to his death.
- Scandalising Mettaton with their potty mouth.
- Admitting they only visited Undyne to rub their victory in her face.
- Refusing to forgive Asriel.
- Taunting, teasing and bullying various monsters in combat throughout the game.
All things considered, with the potential for a pacifist Frisk to be a gross, cruel, violent, selfish, foul mouthed, unforgiving, bullying pervert having a bit of a nicotine habit seems pretty innocent by comparison. Honestly, it’s refreshing to see a Frisk who isn’t all sweetness and love nor Damien in a stripy jumper. Flawed, human Frisks tend to be my favourite.
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I'm so glad you're enjoying this depiction of Frisk. I know everyone has their own personal head-cannons and what not but I do hope that this story is able to produce a well rounded version of Frisk, complicated enough to be interesting but not so much so as to be confusing.
Thank you very much for your carefully thought out comment. Honestly, I saw it and really wanted to wright something equally nice but my brain just keeps stalling. You've killed my brain with kindness and I thank you for it. I sincerely hope that you're having a wonderful day because you've made mine just a little bit better. Thank you again ^_^
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Well, tell bad words, every you want, but please, NO SMOKING, then Frisk stop being an adult and become a Thug :v
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I actually have plans to address Frisk's smoking habit later in the comic. Smoking isn't good for you. It is in fact very bad for your heath...... but so is fried food, ice cream, cheese, and not exercising because one is too busy drawing or playing video games. I don't believe only "thugs" smoke and I'm sorry that you do. Perhaps my comic wont be to your liking because it's going to happen a few more times. I hope you're able to find other comics that you'll enjoy more ^_^
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Yes, smoking is bad... whatever.... afterall, cancer will not be Frisk's death cause...
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this is true, and it's hard for Frisk to really be concerned with cancer when she's got something inside her that heals her injuries. Alas, us mere mortals do not have such a luxuries. If I did you can count on me eating all the bacon and cake every day of my life. Oh man!
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Well, a sickness will not kill Frisk... but someone else will...
Maybe it will be for good...
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It's a distinct possibility ^_^
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Hehe, she got a bit distracted during a battle. Happens to the best of us ^_^
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Yeah, this Frisk smokes. It started as a simple excuse to step away when she was having trouble with Chara, but became a constant habit to calm her nerves.
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YAY! UNDYNE AND ALPHYS ARE MARRIED!!!!!!! The best part!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^w^
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I just had to. They're so cute together. Really, I need to draw some Alphys/Undyne fan art with just the two of them. They're just fantastic.
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Yes!!!! Course are! ^^ I know it will be amazing!
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...Why does smoking and flirting make her so much cooler? Well them technically...I always see Frisk as a girl.
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From what I understand the original Frisk is meant to be interpreted any way the player wishes. Male, female, both, neither, are all correct. Honestly, I'm stunned I haven't seen more Alpha, Omega story lines for Frisk, but oh well. The Frisk I'm using in this particular comic, is female.
Smoking is unhealthy, but this Frisk doesn't much care about that. I find her self destructive nature pared with a constant allusion to immortality through procreation fascinating.
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Well I like it. Please keep up the posts. The drawing style and the story line is great.
So with page 5 and the prologue, does that mean she did kill Papyrus but not Sans?
Really wish the game explained Gaster more...
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I think I'm at page 8 now. The first 5 kind of ended a scene so I have them all together with the prolog. I started posting just the current page and the before and after page links with the updates at page 6 because I was thinking this comic series was going to get rather long. Pap is alive in the current time line. But yes, she did kill everyone at one point, even Sans... but then reset.
you can find page 6 here fav.me/d9tukp6
I hope the comic continues to entertain you ^_^
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Oh, I already saw the other chapters. Just wanted to know about the reset you just mentioned.
So...she reset but Chara doesn't have control of her, did she reset before killing the king and Flowy or...?
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okay, sorry, I misunderstood 
I don't want to give too much away, but I will say that Chara was in control of Frisk's body for a very long time. Possibly years. In that time, at one point or another, everyone dies. However, I've broken cannon game play in the how and when they die for reasons that will eventually be revealed. So yes, the king and Flowy do die at some point in the death runs that Chara has control over but in a way that doesn't trigger the end of the world.
.... I'll add a little addendum here that the plan stated above may change because I'm always getting new ideas and new information from fellow fans that change what I want to do with this story, but so far, yeah, everyone dies and Chara was in charge in this universe.
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Eh, smoking is bad, Frisk.
I only barely am okay whenever a version of Sans (or US!Pap) does it, and that is solely because they are skeletons.
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I do intend on addressing the smoking later in the comic... though it's going to be much later.
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Never mind anime. I just saw that it was a video game!
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I see the Final Fantasy games as interchangeable with anime in style a lot of the time.
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I think I died when Frisk made that face while flirting XD And yay Undyne and Alphys are married!
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Frisk is trying very hard to turn the charm up to 11 while silently fighting her inner demons. She does quite admirably I think. I just love Undyne and Alphys as a couple. They are so cute together I had to have them wed.
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Frisk did a damn fine job at it XD I love how Undyne and Alphys took it so lightly. Just shows what kind of person they grew up to be haha
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hmm, I think this Sans will smoke too, but doesn't like that Frisk smokes because he's unsure what might happen if she dies. That worry is pretty much the only reason he hasn't killed her himself.
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