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CrystalEnceladus [2016-11-01 07:10:34 +0000 UTC]
Love the highlights, and the hair is so realistic. Nice tender picture!
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Jooleya [2016-10-12 13:22:36 +0000 UTC]
It's wonderful to see you improve with every drawing. The charcoals seem to really suit you, you get awesome contrasts and a really good level of detail. For some reason I love the little shadow the earring casts. And the hair is wonderful, it shows that you enjoy drawing hair. I also really like the dark shadowy area on Captain Hook's hair.
The metal of his rings also works marvellously here, just like the leather textures of the jacket.
As far as content goes, you captured their facial expressions very well, it conveys a lot of feeling.
The only thing I'm in two hearts about is the skin tone. I like that the tan paper imitates a skin tone and you shaded the faces very well, but the greys tell me it's a b&w image, yet the tan paper says 'but the skin tone is in colour, it's a colour image', which then messes with my mind. It keeps skipping from really liking it to thinking 'there shouldn't be grey on a tan face, why are there no light tan tones' and then back to liking it etc. It's probably my mind being a bit weird.
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J-Cody In reply to Jooleya [2016-10-13 00:35:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Jooyleya! I've always been intimidated by charcoals because of how messy and uncontrollable they seem. I've been pleased with the results so far. And I love the earring shadow too! It just proves that it is the small things that make the picture. The hair is always my favorite bit. Since I'm left handed, I started this drawing with Emma's hair so I didn't smear charcoal even when using a spare sheet of paper. I'm kind of on the fence about the shadow area on Hook's hair. I'm going to put it down to no opinion because something bothers me, but I don't know what.
I fudged those rings. While drawing them, I kept coming back to what you said on my other piece and just went 'to hell with it, more contrast!'
I'm with you on the skin tone. I like it and I don't like it. Most of my issue is with her face and the grey. I really enjoy using the toned paper but I think I need to use more toned grey when drawing portraits.
Here is what the grey looks like. (Ignore the anatomy and shading...both are bad)
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Jooleya In reply to J-Cody [2016-10-16 08:25:21 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I've not been touching charcoals ever since I was required to do a charcoal drawing in school for the same reason. It was one of those natural charcoal sticks and I got dust, smears and fingerprints all over my art, which did little to endear charcoal to me.
Now, however, I'm seeing awesome charcoal art and start to wonder whether I should give the medium a second chance.
Anyway, yes, with some things like the shadow on Hook's hair, personal preference is a big factor. I think it absolutely works, but I also know that feeling of something not seeming quite right.
The rings definitely work. Contrast makes metal work, as light glints off it like crazy.
For the skin tone, I think the grey paper definitely makes for a more harmonious overall result, as the brain isn't getting mixed messages about colour vs. no colour. That being said, I do like the tan paper, too. It just also makes my brain feel funny when it switches back and forth between its intuitive expectations and the grey-on-tan reality.
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Jooleya In reply to J-Cody [2016-10-18 18:40:03 +0000 UTC]
Charcoal pencils sound much more pleasant to work with than the loose charcoal. And a full set of pastel pencils sounds like a good idea. It might solve the portraits on tan paper problem, if you can use tan shades for the faces instead of greys and whites.
Strangely enough, I dislike q-tips for blending. But that's with pencil. They just aren't precise enough and don't take enough pressure. But I can see them working with charcoals, which is more powdery and prone to smudging/blending to begin with. Maybe if I find a nice set of charcoal pencils one day I'll just pick it up and see how they are. Am I right in assuming that for charcoals a certain amount of texture in the paper is preferable over very smooth paper?
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J-Cody In reply to Jooleya [2016-10-19 18:25:42 +0000 UTC]
For me the qtips work well with charcoals because of how easy it is to spread the medium. After I get a basic layer down, then I add details. Derwent sharpens well with a Generals sharpener...and oddly enough Artist Loft from Michaels isn't half bad either. I don't get much chipping from them and get a finer point. I started off with a cheap set from amazon that had willow sticks, charcoal blocks in hard, med, and soft, and pencils in hard, med, and soft.
As for the paper it depends how you are going to use it. In the art above, it is a rather smooth paper and it is easy to blend giving me dark and light without showing texture form the paper. For me, the smooth but retaining a small amount of tooth is great because I use paintbrushes for the skin and it leaves a nice gradient. I haven't tried it on Bristol board, but I'll give it a go this weekend.
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The background on this is charcoal and the paper is a Strathmore 400 series drawing paper so there is more tooth than the toned tan. You can see the texture of the paper in the charcoals. I'm sure with more effort and time I could achieve a smooth blend, but why make life harder when I can just use a different type of paper?
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ravenlloyd [2016-10-11 03:05:55 +0000 UTC]
wow her hair is so beautiful
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J-Cody In reply to ravenlloyd [2016-10-11 20:44:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Its such a pleasure to work with long hair.
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shmuckwolf [2016-10-10 08:32:00 +0000 UTC]
This just great work Jessica
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ArtJournal77 [2016-10-10 08:21:13 +0000 UTC]
Ahh so pretty
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J-Cody In reply to ArtJournal77 [2016-10-11 20:45:15 +0000 UTC]
And super easy to draw! Thank you!
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