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Matthewthewonderer [2016-07-07 00:14:32 +0000 UTC]
I'm so loving this part for when I've read it and imagined it.
I'm glad Bryan gets to spend some time with Romana again, but this time being tutored on how to make art. He wasn't good at art at first, but I'm glad the Naga cheered the kid up and mentioned something about practice.
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Matthewthewonderer In reply to jazz316 [2016-07-07 00:47:22 +0000 UTC]
You bet I do. I had a feeling that Romana will be Bryan's art teacher.
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Dan3579 [2014-06-30 22:11:59 +0000 UTC]
I am a little surprised that Civil Air Patrol or search and rescue hasn't come looking for him and his parents. If they did God only knows what their reactions would be to what the find on the bank of the river. Really good story though, and Bryan is totally calm. I would die of joy and a heart attack.
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jazz316 In reply to Dan3579 [2014-07-01 01:15:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much and I may put that idea into my story
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Dan3579 In reply to jazz316 [2014-07-01 05:54:44 +0000 UTC]
your welcome. It would make more sense if that happened.
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e2s86 [2014-06-30 00:22:18 +0000 UTC]
nice
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games4355 [2014-06-29 21:44:00 +0000 UTC]
I've waited nearly SIX months for this.
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