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General-Zaldyrn [2013-11-20 03:04:12 +0000 UTC]
That is... a very sad backstory, but you know it could very well be our future one day if we dont change.
im kinda curious about seeing what the surface looks like,but i imagine its polluted?
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jbconcepts87 In reply to General-Zaldyrn [2013-11-20 03:27:11 +0000 UTC]
Very. I haven't really paid attention to Tyr lately, just been focusing on Freyja.
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Vumpalouska [2013-11-18 20:16:18 +0000 UTC]
Why haven't the natives of Tyr colonized Freyja?
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jbconcepts87 In reply to Vumpalouska [2013-11-18 21:29:55 +0000 UTC]
I haven't come up with a story for them yet. But my idea is they are unable to pull enough resources together to colonize it. They are a miserable race that are kept barely alive by machines. Due to this, they have devolved into an embryo like form and are incapable of long distance space travel. They could send probes to Freyja but all of their energy is used to just keep themselves alive. I wanted to use this as a warning to humans. I believe if we continue on this track this could be our future.....
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Vumpalouska In reply to jbconcepts87 [2013-11-18 22:19:18 +0000 UTC]
I think bonding with machines would be awesome. Who wouldn't want to be a cool, immortal cyborg?
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jbconcepts87 In reply to Vumpalouska [2013-11-19 00:33:22 +0000 UTC]
Well its only cool if you can move and do cool stuff. They are in pods being fed with tubes, basically Tyr is a planet wide hospital for the whole population.
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Vumpalouska In reply to jbconcepts87 [2013-11-19 12:14:29 +0000 UTC]
With their advanced technology, can't they build themselves mobile bodies, like the weak, squid-like Daleks from Doctor Who?
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jbconcepts87 In reply to Vumpalouska [2013-11-19 14:18:49 +0000 UTC]
There wouldn't be enough for the whole population but I guess a few of them could
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thormemeson [2013-06-25 00:01:49 +0000 UTC]
very nice world
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thormemeson In reply to jbconcepts87 [2013-06-25 00:47:06 +0000 UTC]
I like it I am in the process of making names for colonies for my own ebook work. Care if use the name tyr for a mining colony?
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jbconcepts87 In reply to thormemeson [2013-06-25 00:53:50 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. Tyr is just the name of the norse god of law, so i don't own it. Feel free
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nvoracle [2013-06-24 16:51:44 +0000 UTC]
Very cool planet. Beautiful render. I don't suppose you have the texture available for it and the moon?
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jbconcepts87 In reply to nvoracle [2013-06-25 01:01:10 +0000 UTC]
I took different sections of the earth's moon and auto blended them with panorama. Then i desaturated it and distorted it with spherize 100%
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Darwin-King [2013-06-20 14:27:24 +0000 UTC]
So nice to see more people making their planets and whanot.
I like how you're making it a realistic futuristic(ish) world, where biodiversity is low and they have a colony on the moon. The sentients on my planet, Suniv Sol, are at a sort of at a 1930's type of time, but they are developing space travel already because of inspiration from the explosive creatures of their world.
(There's an abundance of N2O4 in their atmosphere, and the creatures there evolved to use N2H4 to combine with it and use it as a rocket fuel, so the sentient Sunivians use it as their own fuel and after discovering it's explosive potential they figured it can be used to reach space, and it went from there.)
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Darwin-King In reply to General-Zaldyrn [2013-11-20 20:56:22 +0000 UTC]
Not quite realistically sound, but I like it, so I'll stick with it!
Thanks for the compliment!
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jbconcepts87 In reply to Darwin-King [2013-06-20 16:33:39 +0000 UTC]
Thanks im glad u like it. I like your concept too. If ur interested, check out the rest of my Expedition Freyja series here [link] more creatures are coming
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