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joelashimself β MLP FIM 'The forgotten element' Ch1-19
Published: 2012-10-26 23:20:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 11403; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 122
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Seems Rainbow made an enemy or two in her child hood........Previous [link]
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How ironic how the Element of Loyalty is accused of backstabbing, abandonment, and desertion.
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Aww.... damn. Bad time to space out Pinkie Pie.
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That Female pegasus w/ Sunstripe reminds me of Pinkamena from "Cupcakes", expression-wise.
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The pony who was just standing next to sunstripe, I REALLY LIKE HER MANE!!
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Holy crap, the plot thickens. Glad to finally get back to this.
Also pinkie.
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HAHA! Wait... SPOILERS!
The traitors to the throne are lecturing Rainbow Dash about loyalty?! Seriously, is there a trope for Moral Lectures From The Immoral?
On a more important note, experimental dress designs, Rarity? How much has Twilight rubbed off on you?
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I'm so confused! Are those two working with Trixie and the unicorn guy or aren't they! Please clear this up for me!
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I'm getting there dude, hang tight.
It's gonna be awesome, I promise.
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Some pony deserves a work of class ass kickin'!
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Amazing as always. Can't wait to see where this goes. WORK FASTER! xD
One thing's bothering on this page - if RD's hurt under her left eye, wouldn't she be opening her right? The expression's great but kinda ruined by the fact that she's showing more anguish on the right side of her face. Sorry to be so nit-picky. `^^
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cheek and jaw wound.
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Plot is moving along as awesome as always, but the typos kinda stand out in this one. More than usual... May I suggest getting a proofreader?
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I did. Turns out my wife's an even worse speller than me.
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Oh man. Love the artstyle! I gotta say, I love the eyes and cheeks the most.
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dunno. but one thing is certain, none of us likes her very much right now.
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Bitch won't be so smug once she gets thrown in the Fluttershed...
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Very good storyline only a few typos or misspellings here and there amazing art and good characters...
You my friend have gained a new watcher
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Yeah, I'm no Hemingway. But I'm glad you like it!
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Oh come on Rainbow doesn't represent all of the things you've listed Pinkie coz they deny the element of loyalty. At least I hope so she wouldn't be it if she were THAT bad. Unless it's some kind of dark alternate reality...
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DoesnΒ΄t it show that she is the true element of loyalty that despite all her flaws she would never abaddon her friends no matter what?
Remember even AJ the element of honesty could lie, though badly, into PinkieΒ΄s face when it came down to her surprise birthday party and that ended with Pinkie believing she has no friends anymore before Dash dragged her the whole way to the farm.
And donΒ΄t get me started on Twilight Sparkle the element of Magic and her "100% succesful spells".^g^
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I think, that what she said was true... in some way xD
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In the way that she's not like that at all when it comes to serious matter. Yeah. It could be one of her assets that she can be different when she has to be. But still I'd never call her selfish from what I've seen. I think Dash unnecessarily is given so many flaws. It's like we don't know to which pony give any given flaw so Rainbow Dash is our "default".
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Loyalty, bitch. ^^
Also Pinkie is darn funny. 
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Twi, magic smack that bitch!!! *insert rageface here*
LolΒ΄d at PinkieΒ΄s "defense" though, it was so Pinkie-like. XDDD
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what the buck is up with this pegasus mare with her mane styled as a thunderbolt?
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Gah! I knew I forgot to fix something!
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Why couldn't SHE be the one that got kicked in the head?!?!?!
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Looks like somepony needs a good, kick-in-the-β’^<}*]~>!!
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You really have a way of making me want to punch the shit out of your antagonist
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Agreed. I need to hit something.
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And here I thought she would be the caring one.
BUT NOPE! What a bitch!
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...Still no followup to Sunstorm's betrayal from the previous two pages? I mean, assuming that's what happened and all...
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*Sunstripe*
And be patient. Rest assured, It's all coming to pass.
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...Right, that's his name...
So, what's this new character's name?
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Yes, yes.
I've never won a medal for spelling.
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Most interestingly in all this... is how this mare is listing a past slight by Rainbow... listing out everything that Dash DOESN'T represent. Backstabbing, abandonment, desertion...
I'm definitely intrigued! Can't wait to see more backstory to this
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Now is when Twilight uses her magic to grab that bitch by the hair and tells her to apologize, and when she doesn't {obviously she wouldn't} Twilight rips one of her wings off and tells her again. PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE make this happen?
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