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This is a small Metroid Prime pitch I sent to Marvel, it's in Portuguese obviously, so here's the translation:

"In the depths of space... Under de surface of the planet Zebes, I, Samus Aran fought the pirates of space!
Eventually I ended up destroying their operation, annihilating the parasites known as 'Metroids' and to end it all, I killed the Mother Brain.
But the pirates weren't finished yet."

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Artwork (c) Joel Sousa
Metroid (c) Nintendo
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Comments: 30

Combak [2012-08-07 21:52:06 +0000 UTC]

Just in case no one pointed this out to you: Metroid Prime took place directly after the original Metroid game but before Metroid II.

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Joelchan In reply to Combak [2012-08-07 23:13:06 +0000 UTC]

No need for you to point that out to me or anyone else in matter a fact!
I already knew that. I believe it was when I played metroid prime on game cube that I knew that.
This pitch is nothing more than a exercise of drawing a sequencial story in wich I just used Metroid as "background". So you don't need to be so literal about everything you see here.As you already noticed on another comment to page 9, I believe, I even used a part from Metroid prime 3 corruption because I thought it would serve well as a "boom" page since it was a full action packed scene.Even her spaceship is not the same as the one depicted in the first prime game.
Well maybe it was my own fault...shouldn't have called this Metroid Prime, maybe only metroid or whatnot.
Anyway thanks for the comment. It's nice to see such fervorous metroid fans!

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Combak In reply to Joelchan [2012-08-08 00:21:16 +0000 UTC]

It helps to have a best friend and neighbor who is/was pretty involved in sequence breaking and speed running.

And I apologize for that. I really should have checked the data that Corruption was released before making that comment. And the sequence comment was caused by some confusion as to how much of the back story or chronological order of Metroid, so I apologize.

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Joelchan In reply to Combak [2012-08-08 08:59:27 +0000 UTC]

There's no need to apologize.
If I thought you were being obnoxious in any kind I wouldn't have wasted my time answearing you. So we're cool!!

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Kelthemos-of-Nismon [2010-10-13 12:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow, very marvel in appearance.

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zkoftherebellion [2010-08-21 06:14:38 +0000 UTC]

purple ship?

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Chocorroles In reply to zkoftherebellion [2010-10-05 16:40:32 +0000 UTC]

As seen in Metroid Fusion [link]

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astrotoadp5 [2010-07-30 08:11:30 +0000 UTC]

looks awesome, but there's already a metroid prime comic. meh, one more can't hurt i guess xD also nice job mimicking the speech from the SSBB soundtrack. "in the reachers of space, below the surface of planet Zebes, Samus Aran faced the Space Pirates. She destroyed their operation, wiped out the parasites called Metroids, & defeated Mother Brain. But the Pirates were far from finished." XD

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Joelchan In reply to astrotoadp5 [2010-07-31 09:48:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! Glad you liked it!

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PEACETHROUGHPOWER [2010-07-30 00:35:46 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I like it!

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Joelchan In reply to PEACETHROUGHPOWER [2010-07-31 09:47:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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PEACETHROUGHPOWER In reply to Joelchan [2010-07-31 11:19:57 +0000 UTC]

No problem!! ^^

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NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-29 19:00:21 +0000 UTC]

You sent it to Marvel???? O_O
Wow...lol

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Xnessax In reply to NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-29 21:08:34 +0000 UTC]

LOL.
this manga is in portuguese ?! O_O'
i readed this i undestand xDDD
i think it is cool *0*
LOL

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NintendoSensei77 In reply to Xnessax [2010-07-29 21:15:32 +0000 UTC]

I do too xD

The ship is purple O_O lol

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Xnessax In reply to NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-29 21:47:37 +0000 UTC]

O_O *-* i love purple because it is my favourite color

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NintendoSensei77 In reply to Xnessax [2010-07-29 21:52:27 +0000 UTC]

xD

Although Samus does get a purple ship after her orange ship got destroyed sadly in the game, Metroid: Fusion

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Xnessax In reply to NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-29 22:37:49 +0000 UTC]


Wow.
awesome

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NintendoSensei77 In reply to Xnessax [2010-07-29 23:02:14 +0000 UTC]

xD
Yeah...so, she kind of has 2 ships lol

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Xnessax In reply to NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-29 23:37:54 +0000 UTC]

LOL!?!
XD

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NintendoSensei77 In reply to Xnessax [2010-07-29 23:58:53 +0000 UTC]

If she was real
But the purple ship can only be started manually.

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Xnessax In reply to NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-30 00:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow cool XD real ? LOL don't have her in Earth? XD

Did you see my new submits ? are from Manga Metroleaf (looks like metroid ) ,it has Samus Aran
LOL

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NintendoSensei77 In reply to Xnessax [2010-07-30 00:53:45 +0000 UTC]

Actually, I would go out for missions in space with Samus

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Xnessax In reply to NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-30 01:36:35 +0000 UTC]


cool ^^

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NintendoSensei77 In reply to Xnessax [2010-07-30 01:37:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah...it would be fun trying to destroy those Space Pirates lol.

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Xnessax In reply to NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-30 01:54:46 +0000 UTC]

ah
i see this on manga Metroid.. ^^ she fight Ridler it's a story from manga Metroid.

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NintendoSensei77 In reply to Xnessax [2010-07-30 20:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Ridely, the fire breathing dragon lol.

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Xnessax In reply to NintendoSensei77 [2010-07-30 23:18:13 +0000 UTC]

LOL

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tchikara-ka [2009-01-11 04:05:08 +0000 UTC]

muito bom!

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Joelchan In reply to tchikara-ka [2009-01-11 18:43:05 +0000 UTC]

'brigado!

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