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Jomina — The Rain In My Soul -- JDA
Published: 2004-03-01 03:48:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1480; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 457
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Description
The torrential downpour of my spirit will wash me clean once more...or rip me apart forever...
Shelter me from this storm...
Model : Jolene
Background stock : picture : [link]
NOTE: This is a collaborative effort between and myself
Image was worked by both, the words are mine.
Feedback GREATLY appreciated!!
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NOTE: Resubmitted a slightly cropped version to show the figure a little better. Might like it more now.
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Comments: 90
Pearl Jam - sitting on the dock of the bay. when i saw your shot the song immediately came into my head. very interesting image...its so lonely
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wow, i think i have never seen rain-lines on a picture like that , it is an instant fav !!!
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i thought when i used this stock it was good....but urs blows mine away...good job...
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As usual your composition is awesome, but there's something wrong with the shadows of the pier poles. They seem to put an extra parting in the wooden "flooring" of the pier itself, if you know what I mean. And the girl seems to have no shadow.
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I didn't see the original, but I like this one a lot... great work...
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WOW very cool shot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Oh yes...I love awesome work....this absolutely fits the criteria..great work....
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looks a bit dark to me, but i like the lighting and compostion of it
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I've left this one in my profile for a few days too. Aside for the need for some blurred shadows, I really like it when you start mixin in bridges with your work. I think you have a trademark idea going with that.
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Hmm, nice work! I can't shake the feeling that something just isn't perfect, or else I've become able to discern photomanipulations like no other. I still quite like it, though.
Ah, just found what I'm missing: she needs a more profound shadow cast on the wood. Aside from that small imperfection, this is great work, both shots are great!
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This is one of the most surreal works I've seen from ya.
Love the perspective and shades... Theme in this image is just awesome.
Great manip. 
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The figure is eerie, the lighting wonderful, how it fades from light to dark. The one thing I don't like is the lack of ships in the sea. I think one, solitary, dilapidated sailboat might add something to this photo.
But hey, I'm no photographer!
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whoa... it's been a while since you've done these photomanipulations (at least i think so ^_^"
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holy moly guacamoly and anything else that rhymes. Gret job!
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This is definately awesome. I love the feeling it gives me.
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SPOOKY! Man I love this! Definately goin' down in the favorites. Wonderful effects and great shot in general.
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For some reason, I can barely tell if that's a person. Might just be me... anyways... I do like it and the concept and I love the background image. 
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ira this is amazing. it wasn't showing up for me earlier and that just made me even more anxious to see it..it was worth the wait, i loove this!
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Amazingly beautiful in a mysterious way. 
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take out the person and its a great piece...the person doesnt really fit...hard to tell what it even is...and it really looks pasted on
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I really like this one a lot. The whole atmosphere is great. However, the subject is very hard to make out. There's just a lot that's unclear. The distortion does lead onto some abstract undertones though which reminds me of Silent Hill. Great job on blending the background as well.
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Thanks, very much
Ahh well, first time i've tried to do something even close to this type of thing, so it was a learning experience
And thanks again!!
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Nice work. Very deep and emotional though the figure looks a bit out of place. I think it's because it's a little bit yellower than the background. I really like the background photograph, and the title really depicts the mood.
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Yeah, I do like this cropped version a little better, too bad DA won't let me fave it again, (same file name, etc..) Oh well....
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This is creepy and I love it!!! the only thing I'm not sure I like is the unbalanced light. I usually would go for that but in this picture the left side seems almost too dark. but its still awesome. It seriously gave me chills down my spine when I looked at it. Beautiful!
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this is extremely beautiful and yall did a good job.
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looks awesome i love the contrast and the position of Jolene in this
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i think this picture would look better with no one on the bridge at all...
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the darkness of this picture is awesome, great composition
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Wow.
This is just ... wow.
Sry but I really can't find anything more intelligent to say at the moment... ^_^
It is really good, you know..
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