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Published: 2004-04-02 08:08:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 921; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 174
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Sometimes a hurt can be so strong as to never heal...... even if it's only a memory...
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Background : [link] (for the pic itself, so you can see the changes made)
NOTE: I've been placed under orders by Jolene and Jenny to post this or they threaten bodily harm
I was originally not planning on even SAVING it, but... anyhow here we goThis was just practicing, but I think it turned out well, really. I love how surreal it feels to me, and I had a great time making it. Its as close as i can get to what I was planning for it hehe
FULLVIEW RECOMMENDED OR YOU GET NO COOKIE!
Feedback on this one is critical for me, guys. Love? Hate? Fav? Flame?
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Comments: 53
so sad and beautiful, the contrast with the totally white sky is perfect and the figure of her fading, you are a genious
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very very nice and ghostly..kind of like someone's ghost reappearing to their original place. I really love it, 
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heheh actually though the colors make it hard to tell, it was intended to be water that she was in
thats why you can see her below it heheh
but yeha like i said i know i made a lot of mistakes on that one, but it was a learning experience, and i was demanded to post
Thanks Tina!
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new model!?! WHAT!?!?!?!?! That's pretty skecthy doing something like that j/k,
Great job on it mate
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This is beautiful work man! My only gripe is that she just sorta becomes transparent.....or is that desired?
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thats intended actually hehe shes either a memory or a ghost, depending on how one wants to see it.
and thanks very much!!
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Oh My God!!!!!!!! This is DEFINITELY my favorite of yours! A dark emotion but a light picture. Perfect. Simply perfect.
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I love how it seems she is sort of melting into the water, like a memory that slowly fades, but not quite ever gone! Awesome manip!!!
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Where's my cookie? I want a nice big chocolate chip one 
Ok, this is excellent, you did a great job with the concept and putting it together and that reflection kicks butt!
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............Yeaaaa no. to me, it just looks to....ugh, is the only way I can discribe it, at the bottom, the water, looks more like...dirt..and possibly smoke, eye gets drawn to the tree, when it should be the girl that is the focal point....and that black line on the edge of the water (tree root?) looks to out of palce there....I dunno, sorry to say but this just doesn't appeal to me very much, much prefer your other stuff, dissapointed
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really amazing! i love it, +fav! honestly it's one of my favorites on da!
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that is a great manipulation! 
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*snatches her cookie and hungrily devours it* It does have a rather surreal feeling to it, possibly because of the bleak sky. ^^ It fits the idea quite well... the dead tree adds a lot to the whole feel.
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full view rocks. i just really want a cookie
this is a really great manip, ira. are my eyes playing tricks on me, or is her reflection in the water too? if so, that is SO..cool. (i think i need to expand my vocabulary.)
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thank you! Yep I used a little bit of cloning work to get a reflection effect.. came out pretty good i think 
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beautiful blending job! i really like the composition and tones. awesome work!
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This is a great manipulation. I really like the rural themes placed in it. What's especially notable on this piece is the blending job you did on the model in the water. I really like how you incorporated that.
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this looks beautiful miss Claire has the perfect pose in this one
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well done, although the water just looks slightly odd, but still good!
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I'm lovin' it... I like how it just kinda flows...
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This is really good.. Composition is nice, although I would prefer the tree to be further away so the focus would end up on the lady instead.
Great idea here! The only thing I can see that isn't all to well is the transformation from lady to water.. The reflection is awesome, but where the water really breaks becomes a bit too fuzzy.
Overall, a very nice piece.
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hehe thank you so much!
Yeha actually theres a lot of things that i would do differently had i actually planned things from the start with this image. however, as i said i was under demands to post it or they would have hung me to dry and then logged in my account and posted it for me hahah
one thing i didnt care for is how much she shows up.. i actually wanted her a little diffused, but the effect of the background came through too strongly, and so i figured ah well may as well just give her the full view
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wow, this is great. why wouldn't you have posted it?
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I get the cookie! but this is awesome... and if this is only practice.. I cant wait to see what you are cooking up. this is great... I love the changes you made to the original picture. very nice job Ira!
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I agree with the saying in the description-so true. The pic is good, really like the girl's reflection, nice touch. The only thing is this, I think the girl is slightly too sharp. She just stands out a little bit too much. You might want to try toning her down just bit. That's just my opinion. Other than that, good job!!
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wow thats so fuckin weird! i dont know what else to say but weird!! lol thanks for usin my stock
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Hey for something you weren't going to keep, it turned out rather well. So well in fact I am going to have to 
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Now I can't find any words to describe what I'm thinking
so I will just fall on my knees and
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You're right. It turned out EXTRAORDINARILY well. The images look fantastic together! Wonderful job!
~Aurie
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Nice one!
I like the contrast.
Reminds me a bit of "ringu"..
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Lovely work my friend 
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I GET A COOKIE! YAY!!!
Anyway, very interesting composition you have come up with. The whiteness of the sky gives a sense of 'emptiness', which is further enhanced on how the river seems to go on forever and ever, meeting with the horizon. Love how the girl seems to be wading in the water
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