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Published: 2009-01-02 20:12:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 2937; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Description Finally the end of the prologue!

I have to admit I am a little sad that just doing the 15 pages of the prologue has taken almost two years, but I'm so excited that it is finally over!

I had help with the vortex design from =pennomenal . If not for her, I would have just skipped this page. not that it was really hard or anything

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Comments: 17

scifijoe [2015-01-10 04:10:25 +0000 UTC]

hi, is there a Chapter One?
This is a problem with most fan fict's.  They start out great but just end either on a cliff hanger or just stop.
I hope this is not one of them but looking at the date.  I am afraid that it is.  If not please put a link or a hint to go to the story.
Please.  Puppy Dog eyes.

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You-Were-Snarked [2009-04-05 18:13:27 +0000 UTC]

It was an great way to start your story. I enjoyed the style and layout that you used for it. Keep up the great work!

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Jyuami In reply to You-Were-Snarked [2009-04-06 03:00:16 +0000 UTC]

thanks, I'll try to update the next pages soon. I'm really glad you like it thus far.

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hobnobrev [2009-01-27 23:01:33 +0000 UTC]

interesting... I can't wait to see what's about to happen next.

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Jyuami In reply to hobnobrev [2009-02-24 04:07:13 +0000 UTC]

well I'll just have to get to the next pages now won't i?

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Lazy-chicken [2009-01-14 07:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Again I like the Frank Miller touch ...good to see that you are back ^^

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Jyuami In reply to Lazy-chicken [2009-04-03 01:31:41 +0000 UTC]

hohoho,
I'm back every now and then, but I'm glad you see you're back and well too!

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pennomenal [2009-01-03 00:36:58 +0000 UTC]

of course it wasn't hard for you...

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Jyuami In reply to pennomenal [2009-01-03 08:05:02 +0000 UTC]

no it was hard. what i meant was that , it was that it wasn't hard to just skip this page.

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HitoshiHalfbreed [2009-01-02 21:49:55 +0000 UTC]

OFMG! I can't wait to see that actual first chapter of this. It looks very promising. Hm. After seeing the cover page for the first chapter, I am rather anxious to see what things are going to be like in the other dimension. ^^ Oh, and just for a bit of clarification, earlier Betty stated a possible reason for why Shego was hiding out; is it really becasue Shego was hurt by Kim's words?

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Jyuami In reply to HitoshiHalfbreed [2009-01-02 22:57:40 +0000 UTC]

fufufufu....well what Betty says is so the sub-text. lol.

Like I said before, most of chapter one and two are already sketched out. It just takes me forever to clean 'em up. ;_; But as for what will happen to Shego in the other Dimension, that wouldn't be till chapter two or so. o.o I guess divulging this information isn't going to help with you already being anxious huh?

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HitoshiHalfbreed In reply to Jyuami [2009-01-03 00:18:06 +0000 UTC]

Not so much, but hey! That just makes the wait all the sweeter! ^^ Can't wait to read. I hope that cleaning up the picture isn't to difficult. o.o

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Jyuami In reply to HitoshiHalfbreed [2009-01-03 07:47:00 +0000 UTC]

it shouldn't be difficult, but for me it is. :< :sigh:

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HitoshiHalfbreed In reply to Jyuami [2009-01-03 08:51:20 +0000 UTC]

You are really good at what you do, so I wish you the best. ^^

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Jyuami In reply to HitoshiHalfbreed [2009-01-10 04:05:00 +0000 UTC]

heheh thanks

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8Aud8 [2009-01-02 20:17:21 +0000 UTC]

dude, two pages in one day. whats wrong with you? lol XD. That swirly thing looks like water goin down a drain to me. Cant wait to see what happens next

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Jyuami In reply to 8Aud8 [2009-01-02 20:22:47 +0000 UTC]

woah! first comment of the day!

lol, yeah it does. so much for the vortex idea. I was really trying to pass it off as a vortex you know, but go figure you'd see it for what it really is.

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