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Kauthar-Sharbini β€” I Want to See your Smile

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Hello

I feel happy ! do you know why ? because I finally draw something ! and I'm very thankful to my friends who requested me drawing so I can be active in art or I'll be zombi O~O

In the picture you can see ~dandandanao 's OCs .From right Nuzumi the little girl and on the left he is Kazuma . And the cupcake XD
According to her characters profile , Kazuma is selfish, annoying boy who like to do what he wants . Nuzumi calm and very shy little girl . She always received annoyed from Kazuma .. maybe because they are in same school I'm not sure .. I add and guess after seeing several pictures about them . Anyway , they will write their stories ! I really looking forward to read it ! good luck my friend!

Well, I love writing story for pictures which I draw! ... it's been a while !

~I want to See your Smile~

"Nuzumi" a classmate waved and called Nuzumi's name. " we have to hurry or we will be late for baking course" she told her before leaving ! "I know!" Nuzumi arranged her stuffs and took her special notebook from her drawer.She ran as fast as she could to reach the cooking class . While she was running ,she knocked against three boys . "Ah! I'm .. I'm sorry " she quickly apologize and she was about to leave but. " Do you think your excuse is enough?" the boys blocked her way . Nuzumi stepped back " look she is going to cooking class!" one boy said that" really?" the leader said impressively . Nuzumi couldn't say anything she was afraid . "Give us this!" they took forcefully her special notebook" My notebook!" she shout " p-please give it back" she said softly. " we will turn it back if you cook for us!" the leader declared his request " yeah that's great idea boss!" his team agreed " b-but" she tried to speak " WHAT?" He screamed to her make her teared " but I wrote everything in this notebook, I can't cook without it " she said . " it's your problem ! if the cook turned bad we'll throw it" they started laughing at her" No please ! I'm sorry " she asked them to turned back but there was no help .
" STOP !! YOU THERE ! "someone shout . she turned to see someone who came as light . she whispered surprised " Kazuma?" "This is KAZUMA!" the boys started running away ! "STOP RIGHT THERE!" The teacher appeared when he saw boys are screaming . They started to run leaving Nuzumi standing alone . She blinked "Eh!! the class!" She quickly ran to the cooking class .
Front of the cooking class , she was lucky because she arrived before the teacher entered " huff,huff fewh .. I'm on time huff" Nuzumi relived . Before she enter the class, someone block her way . "Kazuma?" she shocked " here" Kazuma gave her notebook back " sigh! you supposed to help yourself ! not stand there crying , girl !!" he said rolling his eyes . " th-thank you " she took her notebook and entered the class quickly . In inner her heart , she felt happy. Honestly , Kazuma always helped others on time but it was the first time he helped her.

The class started , the teacher asked her students to make cupcake . It was first time for Nuzumi to bake cupcake . She listened carefully to her teacher and writing them on her notebook . Then, she started baking and really give her best to make it. After half hour , her teacher took a look at her cupcake " it's so pretty cupcake! the cake mixed coherent , did you make a cupcake before?" her teacher asked " ah.. no .. it's my first time" she said calmly . Her teacher praised her cupcake toward her classmate make her shy. Her cupcake shaped very well. She put a cream carefully . Her friend came "wow it really turned good can I taste it ?" she eat some before waiting " umm! its so sweet ! you did I great !" her friend praised her too " thank you .. " Nuzumi replied shyly . " well, why did you late for the class! I was hardly reserved your chair and not let anyone take it " her close friend complaint . " I'm sorry troubling you ... thank you for caring..honestly, I got problem with boys but Kazuma helped me " " WAH! really! who? and why? and wait! did he helped you! Aha!!" her friend noticed " Now I know why the cupcake is supper delicious , it was for him right?" she teased her" .. ah.. wait.. it's just .. " Nuzumi confused " nuh nuh ! stop bubbling it was clear hehhe " she smiled ." honestly I was thinking to give it as a gift for helping us ! he helped you before remember!" she told her honestly " ah .. right ! that will be great gift ! and we'll be proud!! that will be the best gift ever!" Her friend encouraged her "and it's time to change his angry eyelid " she laughed " thank you !" Nuzumi smiled , she was thinking about seeing him smiling while cooking. Look like everyone wishing to see him smiling " I'll tell the teacher to help you in cleaning the class before going !" she ran for it excitingly " eh wait!" Nuzumi couldn't help but smile .
After the class ended . Nuzumi always helping her teacher cleaning before leaving but this time her close friend was helping too " I'll leave the light and door for you " the teacher said before went out " ok" . Nuzumi took a tray and put the cupcake on it . She wanted to write Kazuma's name by cream . While she was preparing , someone stand front of the table . It was Kazuma . "K-Kazuma !?" she surprised . Without more word Kazuma smirked " you made that cake? " he took the tray " wa-wait!" she catch the tray from other side " what? I helped you then , give it to me " he pulled strongly , but she tried pulled " why I'm tired myself " he took the cupcake and leave the tray made her pulled back and fell into floor . Kazuma smirked " what!? are you going to cry ?" he stood and bite the cupcake " not bad .." Nuzumi cried hard " I. d-.. " she couldn't say any words but ran . " What's wrong with her?" he watched her running out the class . Her friend was finishing throwing the trash saw her ."wait!" she noticed Kazuma inside and he was holding a capcake . She understand is reaction and ran to him " What HAVE YOU DONE! do you know that cupcake was for you !" she scold at him " she didn't told me" Kazuma replied " How she supposed to tell you if you didn't give her a chance! please Go to-" before she complete her words he leave the class " wait! I didn't finish yet !! " her friend was screaming alone .

Nuzumi was crying in the school garden , she wasn't expected him to be so harsh .. but she calmed down because he already have the cupcake .. but that wasn't the way she hoped ... She wanted to thank him but she ended up blaming herself . Suddenly , she saw a tray with cupcake was bitten on it. He turned back to her .She wiped her tears and rolled her eyes " you know ..it's not good to turn the gift back .. it's already for you .." she said sadly " Who said I turned back to you ! you'll give it to me " he scold and give the tray to her and leave " ah.." Nuzumi took the tray and stood silently . After while, Kazuma came look like he was searching for something " Ah ! you are here!" he said walking to her . Nuzumi widened her eyes but couldn't help she smiled ." what's wrong?" he stood front of her ." thank you ".. it was very soft words from her . gather her courage " I always want to say that to you because you helped my friends in class .. and you are so kind .. I want to give this to you .." she give the tray .. and he accept it . "I'm sorry .. it looks a bit ruined but I hope you'll like it " she lowed her head . Kazuma stayed calm and looked at the cupcake . he divided it " take this part" he said but she was shocked " take it! don't worry I didn't bite here" she took the half part . Then , he bit the cupcake . He felt something different " it's delicious " he impressed the taste wasn't good at first " why you stare at me?" he angry but quickly turned his face to his cupcake . "ah.. thank you" she bit her and smiled " I'm sorry .." he apologized , "would you make another next time?" he asked " .. sure!" she felt happy . Both look at each others smiling . He said to himself " Nuzumi looks different , she always cry and hide . I always want to see her smiling face and finally she does" Nuzumi said to herself "I wanted to see him smiling and he did" . They complete eating their cupcake before leaving the school . From that day , Kazuma always smile while seeing Nuzumi .


The End

At the end they share same idea >u< .. I feel happy for them .. I look so funny ...

eh.. I hope you like it ... humm actually , original characters are sweet . Nuzumi is cute .. I hope I captured her character very well . Kazuma is kinda strange .. I'm not good in this type of character I hope the story fit on him >u<

I really wish my English won't turn anything back .. sigh.. I really need to study more for upcoming exam next >__<

At the end , I wish you like it ! and I really appreciate your commission me again , thank you very much

at the end .. I really hope you like it .. my friend
and evryone too


Β© Nuzumi and Kazuma Ocs belong to ~dandandanao
Β© Window of fantasy Bomb style character design Kauthar Sharbini
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Comments: 22

spring-sky [2013-10-19 12:59:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh My God ! I didn't know that *dandandanao had requested this picture for our friend Moony !!


Your style is as adorable as always .I'm going to have a commission too ,God willing .


And I like the short story for it . It's wonderful



** a shout to ~Haru-Flower ,Come and see what Dandan had done !!

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dandandanao In reply to spring-sky [2013-10-20 10:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.. Well Kau chan has a really awesome style.. I can't stop myself from asking for her drawings

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spring-sky In reply to dandandanao [2013-10-20 21:37:05 +0000 UTC]

I agree to that . She should get a DD .Β 

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dandandanao In reply to spring-sky [2013-10-20 10:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.. Well Kau chan has a really awesome style.. I can't stop myself from asking for her drawings

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to spring-sky [2013-10-20 09:00:20 +0000 UTC]

eh!! sweet you know each others! that's exciting !
I don't have anyone in DA who knows me .. sharing same hobby is the best feeling toward friends in real!!

Thank you very much for reading the story ,Β  (I'm sorry if there is any mistakes in grammarΒ  ) >.< I always got excited while seeing her OCs . it likes there is a great work will come soon !

I really appreciate your kindness !
nice to meet you Haru chan !! Β  and good luck to you !

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spring-sky In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2013-10-20 21:15:37 +0000 UTC]

LOL ,to be honest ,we never met . Although we all wish we do .


We are just a bunch of friends whom met at an Arabian forum . Alfrasha.maktoob in case you're curious .


We all like anime characters (in fact ,each has her own imaginary knight ) ,and writing .


*dandandanao ,~Haru-Flower , and I like to draw ,so we joined dA ! Which was a great source of inspiration .


Dandan suggested that we write a story : Β kind of fanfiction plus role playing . Each one of us had chosen her knight and a female OC . It's such a great fun .


So Daniella and Danial were Dandan's OCs ( noticed the name similarity ? ) ,While Nuzumi and Kazuma were made by our 4th friend Moony .( and by the way you showed their personalities just like in our story )


I'm not sure if you can read Arabic , but if you can ,we'd love you to read the story here


So ,as you can see ,we are online friends ,Though God knows I love them as much as my RL friends ,if not more Β 

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dandandanao [2013-09-26 07:34:46 +0000 UTC]

OH MY OH MY You made my day dear
It's really nice and sweet ma sha'a Allah
And you got the couple's personalities exactly I'm really amazed
The Story is really sweet .. I liked it so much
Dear I don't know what can I do to thank you enough

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to dandandanao [2013-09-27 07:02:29 +0000 UTC]

oh my oh my thank you
and I'm happy that you said I did well on their personality , I was too worried ! your OCs help me in that ! they are inspired me ! and drive me crazy about them !
I haven't seen such a cute couple before , they are so cute! shy with angry .. that's new ! you really get a new story
it's really fine! I'm happy you give me a chance to know them more so i who thank you for this

and you are welcome !

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Shirei-Shou [2013-09-24 07:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Its so sweet

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to Shirei-Shou [2013-09-24 16:35:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah they are >u<Β 

Thank you


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CJ-DB [2013-09-24 00:34:45 +0000 UTC]

VEry cute

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to CJ-DB [2013-09-24 16:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you !

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SakuraNakamura [2013-09-23 22:29:30 +0000 UTC]

Aww

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to SakuraNakamura [2013-09-25 14:56:38 +0000 UTC]

I also said that!how did you know >u<
thank you!!

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NekoRenoChan [2013-09-23 13:54:49 +0000 UTC]

This makes me think of Genki Rockets...

Nothing matters, keep on smiling
Never give up, keep on moving on
Imagine and believing
Nothing, matters, keep on smiling
Never give up, keep on dreaming on
Believe what you can do
And don't forget your smile

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to NekoRenoChan [2013-09-25 15:02:27 +0000 UTC]

I was searching I want to make sure ,, I don't remember I heard this .. I have Genki Rock I and II
O_O ..

I like the words! they make me smile ^-^
thank you

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NekoRenoChan In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2013-09-25 17:37:20 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=PnaxQg…

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SECONDARY-TARGET [2013-09-23 11:56:11 +0000 UTC]

oWo such a long story to read

Nice drawing like usual

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to SECONDARY-TARGET [2013-09-23 12:01:22 +0000 UTC]

eh I'm sorry to write too long story XD but 'm happy that finally some stories come into my mind .. I was almost block last months

and thank you so much my friend !

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Marcherin [2013-09-23 11:16:31 +0000 UTC]

Selfish and annoying...sounds like my childhood friend lol xD

Anyway, you're amazing Kau-san! I can't imagine to write for each piece that I draw! *especially if it's another person OCs whom I don't really know orz

You really skilled at both drawing and writing sensei~~ >w<

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Kauthar-Sharbini In reply to Marcherin [2013-09-23 12:12:30 +0000 UTC]

wow really! then I'm interested how you look like when you were childhood were you a cheerful one ?

honesly , I always hope that I do well to describedΒ  the characters in my stories very well ..Β  and I may mistake ..=='. Before I start drawing I read the characters profile and their background story and sometime the creator talking . it become research XD but without these information .. I'm not be able to draw ==; (my week point ) so when I saw someone could draw freely without knowing the characters they are better than me on my eyes!

but I always love reading about others OC and it's very interesting !!! I can discover the person more

and thank you for your sweet words! I really hope to be a writer and drawing ! >u<
thank you so so so much !!!

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Marcherin In reply to Kauthar-Sharbini [2013-09-23 12:51:03 +0000 UTC]

You bet! I'm still cheerful until now!

My friends always said that I'm a very cheerful and optimistic person (it's my biggest weakness because I always see people's good side even though they do something bad )

When I was little, I was a bouncy and talkactive girl who gets along with people easily. But when I graduated from elementary school and entered in junior high school where there're nobody that I know, I started to become a quiet person instead (I'm still quiet until now but after I get along with someone, my talkactive side goes out again lol)


Nah, I think it's not a weak point! Each person have their own way to gather inspiration and I think, it's your very own way to draw something

On the other hand, people who draw freely without knowing the character have bigger chance to make mistakes (because they can draw a pose which contradict with the OC's personality >^<)


I like reading people OC's too. It's very fun to read; and when people requested or commission me, I feel there's a connection between me and the OC after reading them (which makes me easier to draw ^^)

But unfortunately, not every OC have story to tell


Ah don't mention it please! I'm just telling you the truth because I always amazed by the way you write something on each of your works >w<

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