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PrinceofSpirits [2009-08-31 01:24:48 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
I'm sure this is going to be fail, but here I go:
Overall this is a very strong piece. It is pleasing to look at, and the colors make it stand out. You did a very good job.
I'll start with the lighting. You did really well, but there was one thing that I noticed. Since the light source is behind him to the side, there should be some highlights on his right side, but not as much as on his left. The shadows would then be mainly in the middle slightly to his right. Right now, the light source seems to be coming from the top right corner Other than that, I think that the shading turned out beautiful (I also adore the sky).
There were a few things I noticed about the perspective. First is the background, it's hard to tell whether it is some nearby hills or faraway mountains. Next is the sword, the way he is holding it, the blade should be at an angle pointing backwards.
That's all I can think of at the moment, I hope I helped in some way. If I didn't make sense or if you have any questions, just ask. (hfdjhskfjas I felt like I was being to serious lol)
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Ultima-Genova [2009-09-05 06:07:43 +0000 UTC]
may i ask what program you use? (to draw)
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Kittybaka-chan In reply to Ultima-Genova [2009-09-05 06:14:15 +0000 UTC]
To draw? Technically I draw the sketch with a pencil on paper o3o then for the lineart I use paint tool SAI, to colour I use Photoshop Elements 6.0.
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obakutima [2009-09-05 00:45:14 +0000 UTC]
;-; -looks at her sketches- TT~TT -jealous-
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Slightly-Skewed [2009-08-31 00:39:57 +0000 UTC]
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SO FREAKING COOL!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! wow yours is so much better than what I did =/ but I hope that you still like it. In almost done just have to color it ^_^ wow it's so good!!
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Koshi-chan [2009-08-30 23:13:13 +0000 UTC]
OMG IT'S TO EPIC FOR ME!
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lucki-marshmallow [2009-08-30 23:12:55 +0000 UTC]
The scarf looks great. Especially where it's tattered. I think that the lighting looks fine and extremely awesome on his left arm. I practically had an eyegasm.
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Angelichu [2009-08-30 23:12:01 +0000 UTC]
wow very awsome! love the colors! 8D
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PrinceofSpirits In reply to Kittybaka-chan [2009-08-30 23:23:56 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome! Glad to help even if it's a little bit. I could critique it if you want, but I'd probably fail.
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Me-Oh-My-Michelle [2009-08-30 23:07:30 +0000 UTC]
REDORANGEYELLOW~~~~~
pertyfull
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Kittybaka-chan In reply to Me-Oh-My-Michelle [2009-08-30 23:21:02 +0000 UTC]
GREENBLUEVIOLET
Oh I'm sorry I thought we were name the colours of the lovely rainbow.
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