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knightspirit46 — The Redemption Prologue
Published: 2009-02-22 00:37:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 2737; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 27
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Redemption prologue!!!!!!!!!!!!Its finally done!!!!! I'm so happy this is done!!!! In the backround you might see Arrin, *izzehK and ~Warriorsfan101 character. Thanks for everyone giving suggestions and saying positive things!!! Keep up those contest entries!!
Redemption Comic=knightspirit46
Coloring=knightspirit46
Everything else~faithful-friend
I know faithful did everything except color, but this page was done before i owned a tablet, and i sucked at art. I'm doing lineart and coloring for all the other pages.
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Thank you but iv'e moved to
The prologue will continue on this account
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Thank you very much!
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Thank you!
This is being redone though ^^
It'll look way better
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Love pannel two, Bullseye kinda looks like a Ferret in that pic.
Only one critque from me, just that the writing was hard for me to read. Tis all.
Apart from that it's great.
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Thank you!
When you say its hard to read, is it just too small??
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Yeah, that's all.
Other than that it's great, with my old comic my writing was too small too. But I dun like that comic anymore. Don't know if I should start a new one.
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Oh ok.
You should start it again! ^^
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Kewl. I might, need to work on trees ect. x] And need a story I will stick to. :/
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Yeah, you need a storyline if you want a comic/story xD
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Yeah, been writing novelish things alot, so might turn one into a comic, see how I go.
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I have a couple critiques. They're bothering me. 
What program are you using?
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Ah, ok. Thank you Kirada!
~Panels. Got it. I'm redoing this, so i'll be sure to remember that.
~Anatomy. Well, i didn't do the lineart in this, my friend did it. This is an old page too, both of us have improved by alot. 
-oooh, i can't believe i colored out of the lines! >< Thanks for pointing that out, i never noticed. Yeah, i agree, its thick.
And program? We used photoshop elements 3.0 But now I own CS4, i'm not sure which one to use. But the BGs are now going to be done by =DisturbedSpirit
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Use CS4. I used it a lot these past could of years. It's just Photoshop only with fancier effects. 
You might wanna slap it into your friend's face that anatomy can make or break a comic. Look at how many people don't like BBA because the anatomy isn't "great" or "right."
And you could easily break this up into three pages. Use the first panel as a "one-panel" page, where you can explain the situation a little more (as a "narrator") so the readers know why they're at war. So it's not the thought of, "Oh, great, another wolf comic based on war with a creature # times its size. Not interesting."
You have to make it interesting.
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Ok, i will.
She's improved alot, so she knows. She looks back at this page and is shoicked she drew it.
Yeah, i'm going to. I was thinking about doing about 10 pages for this.
And i hate it when people think my comic is a wolf one. Its about weaponry and War. Not animal war, but actual war.
And yes, i'll remember that too
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Love your work and your digital art!!!^.^ Check mine out to give tips for mine improvement!
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Lol. Awesome work knight and faithful! I can't wait to see the remake of this page.
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Thanks Snicker! That means alot :3
And yes, this IS knight lol So i am redoing it xD
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Thanks! The page is being redone
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oh thats sweet! 
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Thank you, but i didn't draw it. If you like the lines, go visit *faithful-friend
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nice job on this i cant wait to see more <3
(srry for being random XD)
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This is amazing! ^^ You and *faithful-friend must have worked really hard on this.
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yeah, it took FOREVER
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Amazing! I wanted to draw as good as you! Just see my stupid comic page 
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Thank you, but i didn't draw the lineart or backrounds, *faithful-friend did
No, your comic, is very nice! And, im trying to get the next page up.
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Nooooo my comic will give you the freaks!!! 
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Ok XD
Thank you, but i'm redoing the prologues.
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Its good 
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Yes, i am, my dad needs help. Kairi is helping me by opening little small commisions for me, and i also have commisions open too.
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Cool, If I had a little money I will commision you 
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well, how much do you have? I can lower it for you.
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I have nothing.
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