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Krande [2015-02-10 11:16:20 +0000 UTC]
Poor clone. His purpose in his life was to destroy things that were mass-produced and replaced even more seamlessly than he was. But at least he died FEELING useful, and satisfied.
It's odd that Palpi told Jango about Anakin, even more that Jango told the clones he talked with Palpatine. I mean, any sane Jedi would just go and beat info out of the Chancelor that he apparently knew about the army on the deleted planet..... OK where were sane Jedi at this time.
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Darth-Millenium [2010-01-07 14:43:13 +0000 UTC]
there is a lot of good stuff in there! i would love to see the comic if you do draw it
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Yahro-Mehr [2009-10-12 00:03:12 +0000 UTC]
this reminds me of the story of Alpha-98 when he sacrificed his life after redirecting an orbital bombardment to his location, saving millions of civilians.
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snicant01 [2008-01-18 17:23:46 +0000 UTC]
A great story I could never take that many down alone on Battle Front 2
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mandalorian55 [2007-11-24 20:22:02 +0000 UTC]
Superb story. I'm actually thinking about writing as well; do you have to write to any letters to Lucasarts or those affiliated with Starwars informing them that you're going to use their material in your own non-canon fan-fic, or do you just note in your comments that the story is based off of Starwars and material not of your own?
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Kuk-Man In reply to mandalorian55 [2007-11-26 17:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Just make a 'disclaimer' note. That seems to be enough for artwork or stories. Give George his credit and everything should be just fine.
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kwasny [2007-07-09 00:59:09 +0000 UTC]
omg this is great you need to keep writing
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elchido12 [2007-06-01 04:12:15 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely amazin! but I have a few questions. What does frek mean? What's an M5? That's pretty much all I want to know. I want to become a big Star Wars geek, so I'm just collecting as much information as I can. I'm also thinking about making a Star Wars story, so reading this helped me a lot. Great details! I can picture the battle scene, but the only thing I would change is, it is kind of hard to follow, in my opinion, 1st person present tense, but still, you have made this quite an interesting story. I think you should make more! But make one with a normal soldier! I know that they don't take on as much intense missions as the ARCs do, but they see just as much action as the ARCs do, so I think that would be really neat!
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Kuk-Man In reply to elchido12 [2007-06-03 03:30:27 +0000 UTC]
Hey, thanks for stoppin' by again!
Frek is a curse, I am not sure if it was ever used in SW expanded universe, but I liked it better than the usual list we use.
The M5 is the WESTAR M5, it's the rifle the ARC Trooper toy came with in 2003. Karen Travis, the author of the Republic Commando novels, gave it a name. I developed a 1/6 version in my scraps section.
Okay, the story starts out in the now. Then the trooper nods off and flashes back to the mission. Then he wakes up in the now.
You are not the first to be bothered by that perspective change, I have gotten that comment a couple of times.
The story was originally meant for a comic book, but I never got around to more than loose sketches.
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elchido12 In reply to Kuk-Man [2007-06-03 06:55:12 +0000 UTC]
Well, I am familiar with fierfek, which I think means in Hutt slang, poison, and the ARCs and Commandos used that as a curse. Well, all of it was well thought up. Nice work!
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vofthew [2007-06-01 00:17:16 +0000 UTC]
dude this was awesome, i always knew that clones were awesome and by far my favorite characters in star wars but i never thought one could cause so much destruction, could i grade this i would give it a 15/10, very nicely done and a definite +fav, keep writing my friend
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Kuk-Man In reply to vofthew [2007-06-03 03:25:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, and thanks for the fave!
I actually had a second verison of this done up, to break it apart and make it a bit easier to read.
I don't know if one soldier could cause so much destruction, but we learned that there were only 100 of the original ARC Troopers, and they were grade-A soldier material. The Republic used them mostly for solo missions, so I figure they could hold their own.
I know that I "Rambo'd" him up a bit, but hey, that was part of the fun.
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vofthew In reply to Kuk-Man [2007-06-03 04:07:44 +0000 UTC]
lol wouldn't have it any other way, hell if he never ran out of ammo god knows how much damage he could really do *thinks about it* yay explosions^_^
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