Comments: 42
Lorphen [2017-12-05 05:17:10 +0000 UTC]
That was such a good story. I was wiggling from all the embarrassment but I loved it~~
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OnePieceIsReal [2017-06-14 23:08:17 +0000 UTC]
This was good!!!
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MissMomoKira [2016-06-13 06:17:39 +0000 UTC]
That moment when you ship Marco and Anabelle XD
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Sonicboom2001 [2016-06-10 03:29:20 +0000 UTC]
I love it!!!
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Wolffang1995Hyano [2016-05-17 12:34:02 +0000 UTC]
lol~ Portgas D. Ace Truly IS Bae~XD
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Topas90 [2016-05-07 02:09:25 +0000 UTC]
I usually don't like these whole engagement or "BAM Love, and they lived happily ever after" fan fictions.
Personally I always need something dark to make the story more realistic.
Or someone needs to be killed (not Ace though...)
But you really did a great job! Really nice sense of humor and solid style.
Best lines:
“Would you look at that” Thatch laughed, smacking a hand on Marco’s shoulder. “Girl just fainted for you!”
-> ME: Girl better go back to work, fuckin' Whitebeard Pirates in da------- (someone shut my mouth, I'm getting way too hyped)
You definitely knew you looked slightly different than from three years ago, puberty does crazy shit sometimes, but really?
-> Did someone Neville Longbottomed
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ArtisticNinjaCat [2016-04-23 04:19:29 +0000 UTC]
It took a right or left hook to the face for Ace to recognize her? MAN he's dense!!
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Izzy-the-Homestuck [2015-10-22 19:00:20 +0000 UTC]
"Ace blurted, his face burning red."
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE XD
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City-Bratzs [2015-10-03 12:09:07 +0000 UTC]
Wow that was amazing! ... how do I even like or favorite this thing -_- new websites are a drag
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momina427 [2015-09-29 12:04:20 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWW! That was so cute <3
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Kumoria In reply to momina427 [2015-10-08 23:35:53 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I hope to write more cute things is the future~
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momina427 In reply to Kumoria [2015-10-09 22:37:32 +0000 UTC]
And I'm looking forward to it!
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HeartShapeStarlight [2015-08-29 06:49:59 +0000 UTC]
Kaze Kaze no Mi was consumed by Marie Reid. But who cares anyway. The story is awesome 😘
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mitunabees8 [2015-06-21 00:17:51 +0000 UTC]
Awesome
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emmettluvsme3 [2015-06-12 03:24:17 +0000 UTC]
LOVED IT!!! It was so very entertaining
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TheFife01 [2015-05-04 03:11:16 +0000 UTC]
That was sooo adorable!!
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Kumoria In reply to TheFife01 [2015-05-11 02:04:35 +0000 UTC]
It's impossible to resist Ace's adorkability <3
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JumpyMinx [2015-05-03 20:54:55 +0000 UTC]
This was so cute, nice job~
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JumpyMinx In reply to Kumoria [2015-05-03 23:28:41 +0000 UTC]
No problem~
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no-one-ever-knows-me [2015-04-05 17:46:57 +0000 UTC]
Aaannnddd then --- he dies --- i just successed in depressing myself... GG WP me GG WP...
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Kumoria In reply to no-one-ever-knows-me [2015-05-11 02:05:59 +0000 UTC]
¿ʇɥƃıɹ ʍouʞ I
-Is not rolling on the floor crying into a pillow-
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Gothfoxgirl [2015-03-06 23:11:47 +0000 UTC]
-takes deepest breath ever- -fangirls- HSIEKBDIMERHRIEMDBWMWKWNDBMSSIELWJEIKDEBWJKADDKELSBWIALWPQPNDIEJRLWNSDILERVKDSKRVEOENEVFJTROLWSNFEJLWDNRHEJEMDND
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HarutoAki [2015-02-25 22:44:56 +0000 UTC]
just adorable
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HarutoAki In reply to Kumoria [2015-03-06 03:11:51 +0000 UTC]
thats why we love him
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Sushinoms [2015-02-21 08:02:58 +0000 UTC]
Cuttteeeeeee
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Kumoria In reply to Sushinoms [2015-03-04 13:20:50 +0000 UTC]
Thank you ^^ I was hoping you'd think that <3
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Yukina-Chi [2015-01-04 20:40:56 +0000 UTC]
It...so fucking cute... Q^Q I want hug him <3
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Kumoria In reply to Yukina-Chi [2015-03-04 13:20:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~ I could just glomp Ace if I could ;u; Love him so much.
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SougoOkita209 [2014-12-24 12:06:17 +0000 UTC]
So cute!!!!!!!
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